for Drifting In Life3/16/2006 c9 dorydafish
so he doesnt no whether he is dead yet?
o this is quite intense man...i like the fact that u are leaving the readers hanging and that u aint giving too much awy at this point.
u going to release all of the mystry slowly or is it going to be like wam! and it will be like OMG wat the hell happeneed?
LOL!
update man...u gotta do it faster!
DDF X
so he doesnt no whether he is dead yet?
o this is quite intense man...i like the fact that u are leaving the readers hanging and that u aint giving too much awy at this point.
u going to release all of the mystry slowly or is it going to be like wam! and it will be like OMG wat the hell happeneed?
LOL!
update man...u gotta do it faster!
DDF X
3/16/2006 c8 dorydafish
AW
hes cry?
dont make him upset...he has to be strong for maddie.
they are going to get together in the end wont they?
i wanna no wat the deal is with kyle is he dead...or weirdly alive?
Cant wait for more...
update soon...
DDF X
AW
hes cry?
dont make him upset...he has to be strong for maddie.
they are going to get together in the end wont they?
i wanna no wat the deal is with kyle is he dead...or weirdly alive?
Cant wait for more...
update soon...
DDF X
3/12/2006 c8 free-to-dream15
sorry it took me awhile..ok it really didn't but it just seemed like forever cause I updated like i dont know 5 days ago or something and so I'm trying to work on the next chapter and yeah now I'm just rambling. lol YAY! A spence (shower he he ) scene! This chapter was so sad but it rocked. update SOON!
sorry it took me awhile..ok it really didn't but it just seemed like forever cause I updated like i dont know 5 days ago or something and so I'm trying to work on the next chapter and yeah now I'm just rambling. lol YAY! A spence (shower he he ) scene! This chapter was so sad but it rocked. update SOON!
3/12/2006 c7 dorydafish
aww man - this story is so good.
put it in young adult coz not many people read general - or maybe they do i dunno.
Spence is in the next chapter? WHOOHOO! result.
i love spence - just in case i havent told u resently.
cant wait for da holiday...YAY!
and so i include my life story - ur always in it. I do like to include wat my best friend is up to - no harm in that (unless of course i wanna dis u - hmm maybe i shud do that)
if i give u reviewers then can u give me some english skills - ur english is way better than mine soo it makes the story a whole lot more real - my writing just ends up to be watever is in my head.
U BETTER UPDATE SOON NEXT TIME OR IT WILL BE UR HEAD!
whhoops - dunno wat came over me
hehe - love ya girlie
DDF X
aww man - this story is so good.
put it in young adult coz not many people read general - or maybe they do i dunno.
Spence is in the next chapter? WHOOHOO! result.
i love spence - just in case i havent told u resently.
cant wait for da holiday...YAY!
and so i include my life story - ur always in it. I do like to include wat my best friend is up to - no harm in that (unless of course i wanna dis u - hmm maybe i shud do that)
if i give u reviewers then can u give me some english skills - ur english is way better than mine soo it makes the story a whole lot more real - my writing just ends up to be watever is in my head.
U BETTER UPDATE SOON NEXT TIME OR IT WILL BE UR HEAD!
whhoops - dunno wat came over me
hehe - love ya girlie
DDF X
3/11/2006 c7 free-to-dream15
ha ha I like Spence also! This was soo sad! He's got to hold on! Update SOON!
ha ha I like Spence also! This was soo sad! He's got to hold on! Update SOON!
3/3/2006 c6 dorydafish
o this is just too sad dear.
i like kyle tho
WHY ARE YOU MAKING HIM SUFFER GOD DAMN IT!
lol
o this is just too sad dear.
i like kyle tho
WHY ARE YOU MAKING HIM SUFFER GOD DAMN IT!
lol
3/2/2006 c6 free-to-dream15
this kind of reminded me of "Just like heaven" lol a very good movie! This was a good chapter! update SOON
this kind of reminded me of "Just like heaven" lol a very good movie! This was a good chapter! update SOON
2/11/2006 c5 dorydafish
DO NOT KILL KYLE! THAT WILL BE SO SAD!
Plus spence will have to suffer then and we dont want that to happen! hehehe!
yes i no i have twisted reasons. LOL!
I like ashley too.
its still sad...Is the action gonna start soon! I HOPE SO!
we love spence.
Dont u dare kill of te story or i will kill u. I NO WHERE I LIVE! and actually i really do seeing as ive been there eleventy billion times (i am aware elevnty billion is not a number!) LOL!
C ya soon
DDF X
DO NOT KILL KYLE! THAT WILL BE SO SAD!
Plus spence will have to suffer then and we dont want that to happen! hehehe!
yes i no i have twisted reasons. LOL!
I like ashley too.
its still sad...Is the action gonna start soon! I HOPE SO!
we love spence.
Dont u dare kill of te story or i will kill u. I NO WHERE I LIVE! and actually i really do seeing as ive been there eleventy billion times (i am aware elevnty billion is not a number!) LOL!
C ya soon
DDF X
2/4/2006 c5 free-to-dream15
lol...do you really want a review like that? ok..here it goes
your story sucks! It is the worst thing I have ever read! Why do you even write it? You should just give writing up all together!
lol JKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJK! lol..really, your story is AWESOME! I love it! So wait is Kyle really dead or does he just think that? I hope hes not dead! Update SOON!
lol...do you really want a review like that? ok..here it goes
your story sucks! It is the worst thing I have ever read! Why do you even write it? You should just give writing up all together!
lol JKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJK! lol..really, your story is AWESOME! I love it! So wait is Kyle really dead or does he just think that? I hope hes not dead! Update SOON!
1/30/2006 c4 free-to-dream15
Loved this chapter! Partly because it shows a memory about how Ashley fits into all of this and they make like a square of best friends (if that even makes sense? lol) I hope you update SOON!
PS: It helped a bit! thanks!PSS: my goal is to update tonight if you want to read! iF not tonight then def. tomorrow!
Loved this chapter! Partly because it shows a memory about how Ashley fits into all of this and they make like a square of best friends (if that even makes sense? lol) I hope you update SOON!
PS: It helped a bit! thanks!PSS: my goal is to update tonight if you want to read! iF not tonight then def. tomorrow!
1/28/2006 c3 
3shuushuu
aarrggh
lol
that was so sad.
aww i feel so sorry for poor maddie.
I still think that i like spence the best tho. i hope they get together :)
i cant wait for all of the exciting stuff to happen and all of the drama to begin.
will be waiting for the next chapter!
DDF X
3shuushuuaarrggh
lol
that was so sad.
aww i feel so sorry for poor maddie.
I still think that i like spence the best tho. i hope they get together :)
i cant wait for all of the exciting stuff to happen and all of the drama to begin.
will be waiting for the next chapter!
DDF X
1/27/2006 c3 free-to-dream15
Aw...I could picture this as well (have a good mind for picturing things...do that with my chaps. before I actually write them) and I started crying! you made me cry! lol...god i am so lame. lol...post SOON or I will not update this weekend! lol ~me~
Aw...I could picture this as well (have a good mind for picturing things...do that with my chaps. before I actually write them) and I started crying! you made me cry! lol...god i am so lame. lol...post SOON or I will not update this weekend! lol ~me~
1/25/2006 c2 free-to-dream15
Continue, continue, continue, continue! I order you! GR! lol...its totally awesome so far and the only real CC I have is to separate the dialogue. It was just a bit hard to read with the dialogue hidden in the paragraph. Other than that it was SWEET! Update SOON!
Continue, continue, continue, continue! I order you! GR! lol...its totally awesome so far and the only real CC I have is to separate the dialogue. It was just a bit hard to read with the dialogue hidden in the paragraph. Other than that it was SWEET! Update SOON!
1/25/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
Aw...I hope he is ok! That's so horrible to get a phone call like that...I would like totally freak out! *next chapter*
Aw...I hope he is ok! That's so horrible to get a phone call like that...I would like totally freak out! *next chapter*