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6/28/2006 c1 a lonely september
all i can say is that this is so sweet.
1/27/2006 c1 16brokendreams21
Quite beautiful and not very depressing. (That's not a bad thing.) Such nice thoughts. Reminds me of so many things. It's simply elegant. Keep up the great work and awesome job!
1/25/2006 c1 Sunami Silverblade
... I. LOVE. THIS. POEM.

GENIUS, KJ, GENIUS! ^_^

The best part really is at the end, the entire poem builds up to this rhythm, this subtle rhyme... SO amazing.

Wasting time on a memory... a brief flicker of something... just hold on to that memory, KJ-you never know. :)

Marvelous work, once again!

-Sunami
1/25/2006 c1 Sunami Silverblade
... I. LOVE. THIS. POEM.

GENIUS, KJ, GENIUS! ^_^

The best part really is at the end, the entire poem builds up to this rhythm, this subtle rhyme... SO amazing.

Wasting time on a memory... a brief flicker of something... just hold on to that memory, KJ-you never know. :)

Marvelous work, once again!

-Sunami
1/25/2006 c1 5RedHairedWriter
that's cool. i know the feeling. but you wrote it beautiful. I liked the bit with the shadows.
1/24/2006 c1 12Silent-Maiden
I have brown hair and this is totally just like me. Awesome job!
1/24/2006 c1 Needa S
Very nice, beautifully written. Thanks for all your kind reviews. I must say ya are right about that one word in my poem. (TG) I need to change that... Keep on writing.
1/24/2006 c1 35Live4Love
I can really picure this guy...great job and thank you for the review, although who knows if it is true right :P?
1/24/2006 c1 Azlyn Nicole
that's so sweet!

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