
9/17/2012 c1 Guest
hating yuri/yaoi doesn't make someone a homophobe, idiot.
hating yuri/yaoi doesn't make someone a homophobe, idiot.
4/15/2012 c8 Explicitly Simple
Oi! Please continue this strory. I can't find stories like this alot, maybe because I'm not really looking, well whatever. This story has a really good start & the building action is really keeping me on edge! Please continue!
Oi! Please continue this strory. I can't find stories like this alot, maybe because I'm not really looking, well whatever. This story has a really good start & the building action is really keeping me on edge! Please continue!
2/9/2011 c8 NadieImportante001
i like your story a lot. not only is your writing style mature and enjoyable, but your characters are fun, and your plot moves along nicely (especially for those of us with short attention spans). i was wondering, since this is one of the better stories i've read on this site, whether you'd be willing to glance over my story? i bet you're busy, so no big, but i need a good opinion, and i would definitely trust yours.
heres the link = /s/2850201/1/The_Life_Times_of_Devon_Part_2
thanks! good job
i like your story a lot. not only is your writing style mature and enjoyable, but your characters are fun, and your plot moves along nicely (especially for those of us with short attention spans). i was wondering, since this is one of the better stories i've read on this site, whether you'd be willing to glance over my story? i bet you're busy, so no big, but i need a good opinion, and i would definitely trust yours.
heres the link = /s/2850201/1/The_Life_Times_of_Devon_Part_2
thanks! good job
12/19/2010 c8 Untitled3579
Interesting view-point, like a reminiscent, hindsight thing. I liked it. And the story was interesting too.
Interesting view-point, like a reminiscent, hindsight thing. I liked it. And the story was interesting too.
1/8/2010 c1
3AlbinoApples
Is this on hiatus? I hope not because it's very good so far. I'm absolutly hooked. The beginning part, where it's talking about sexuality and wanting to buddy up to the shy girl...that reminds me a lot of myself. Haha. Again, hope this isn't on too much of a hiatus

Is this on hiatus? I hope not because it's very good so far. I'm absolutly hooked. The beginning part, where it's talking about sexuality and wanting to buddy up to the shy girl...that reminds me a lot of myself. Haha. Again, hope this isn't on too much of a hiatus
12/10/2009 c2 Carya55
aww man have I been craving some decent femslash and this is Brilliant.
“You know what happens to those girls that never fit in?”
They develop into their own person.”
Probably the best line I've ever read on this site.
aww man have I been craving some decent femslash and this is Brilliant.
“You know what happens to those girls that never fit in?”
They develop into their own person.”
Probably the best line I've ever read on this site.
10/6/2009 c8 acbfed
Now this I like.
Keep it up.
Now this I like.
Keep it up.
7/7/2009 c8
12MBaxter
I really like this story! I'm glad you decided to continue it (sorry about your loss by the way). I'm really interested to see more of what Denise is like!
Baxter

I really like this story! I'm glad you decided to continue it (sorry about your loss by the way). I'm really interested to see more of what Denise is like!
Baxter
7/7/2009 c1
3blankee
Aww... yah... sexuality is a difficult thing to argue with... it's not all happy and perfect... been there... grr... nice story btw, it evokes feelings of... well... lots of feelings...
-len

Aww... yah... sexuality is a difficult thing to argue with... it's not all happy and perfect... been there... grr... nice story btw, it evokes feelings of... well... lots of feelings...
-len
7/3/2009 c8
3fam
I'm so very sorry about your mother! But congratulations on your little bundle of joy! (weird combo...)
Well, I'll be waiting patiently for the next installment of this awesome fic. Take your time, of course; I understand your going through a difficult time right now.
Famirka :D

I'm so very sorry about your mother! But congratulations on your little bundle of joy! (weird combo...)
Well, I'll be waiting patiently for the next installment of this awesome fic. Take your time, of course; I understand your going through a difficult time right now.
Famirka :D
7/3/2009 c8
1Rurikei
I'm really sorry that your mom passed... my most sincerest condolences to you and your family, friends and everyone who was close to her.
This might sound weird straight after, but definitely congrats on your firstborn! Good luck~ (for what, I don't know since I'm still too young to have a child, but I'm sure you're ecstatic).
The fic...I'm really interested to see what they have planned for Denise, haha...and Carine sounds interesting enough; especially that reunion party.
Thanks for the update~

I'm really sorry that your mom passed... my most sincerest condolences to you and your family, friends and everyone who was close to her.
This might sound weird straight after, but definitely congrats on your firstborn! Good luck~ (for what, I don't know since I'm still too young to have a child, but I'm sure you're ecstatic).
The fic...I'm really interested to see what they have planned for Denise, haha...and Carine sounds interesting enough; especially that reunion party.
Thanks for the update~
6/20/2009 c7 mimi
UPDATE SOON,, please!
this is the first femslash story i ever read and automatically beat everything I've read in this site so far! It makes me sad you haven't updated for so long. please continue the story, it's amazing. Sal is love :) XX
UPDATE SOON,, please!
this is the first femslash story i ever read and automatically beat everything I've read in this site so far! It makes me sad you haven't updated for so long. please continue the story, it's amazing. Sal is love :) XX
4/2/2009 c7
25master of suspence
hey ok love were ur taking this story but i have to beg u to finish it i know it's been awhile but u just cant leave it like that! i must know more...PLEASE? ~alyse~

hey ok love were ur taking this story but i have to beg u to finish it i know it's been awhile but u just cant leave it like that! i must know more...PLEASE? ~alyse~
2/13/2009 c7
2Libellule penseuse
This story is very interesting and I just loved!
I noticed it´s been a while since you last updated... I hope you didn´t gave up from this story.

This story is very interesting and I just loved!
I noticed it´s been a while since you last updated... I hope you didn´t gave up from this story.