for my nosering9/25/2006 c1 
21Reaper
You got anose ring a twelve and everyone was impressed? God, you must go to a ver deprived school. At twelve, I was doing spirits with half my school.
21ReaperYou got anose ring a twelve and everyone was impressed? God, you must go to a ver deprived school. At twelve, I was doing spirits with half my school.
6/13/2006 c1 Pumpkin4565
This is crap, my friend. You suck like hell. Wow, wonderful story! Terrible. I love your storyNOT.
This is crap, my friend. You suck like hell. Wow, wonderful story! Terrible. I love your storyNOT.
5/25/2006 c1 64Arwen Starfire
didn't you do a second draft of this story? I think you need to put that up. It had alot more details and stuff.
64Arwen Starfiredidn't you do a second draft of this story? I think you need to put that up. It had alot more details and stuff.
3/17/2006 c1 6Made in Britain
Hey Lizzy great story, you are so much braver than me! And don't listen to that talking dildo ii, he makes everyones stories out to be bad. Well the jokes on him because his are well shit!
6Made in BritainHey Lizzy great story, you are so much braver than me! And don't listen to that talking dildo ii, he makes everyones stories out to be bad. Well the jokes on him because his are well shit!
1/26/2006 c1 ii
Thanks for sharing. I'm so glad to hear how you got your nose pierced. While it's a fascinating story, you still had a few grammar mistakes in it. Please be sure that only one person speaks per paragraph. Also, it leaves me with the impression that you are a very shallow, manipulative girl. Perhaps you are.Anyway, thank you for the beautiful, long, well thought out reviews. I'm so glad you liked my stories. ;-)
Thanks for sharing. I'm so glad to hear how you got your nose pierced. While it's a fascinating story, you still had a few grammar mistakes in it. Please be sure that only one person speaks per paragraph. Also, it leaves me with the impression that you are a very shallow, manipulative girl. Perhaps you are.Anyway, thank you for the beautiful, long, well thought out reviews. I'm so glad you liked my stories. ;-)