for The Beautifully Condemned Wind1/25/2006 c1 
57empathic life
"As it chants its wretched song & dances its controlling dance" I believe I've fallen in love with this poem. It's beautiful and captures the feelings of the speaker very well. I love how you describe the wind. Wow. I wish I could write poems as breathtaking as yours.
57empathic life"As it chants its wretched song & dances its controlling dance" I believe I've fallen in love with this poem. It's beautiful and captures the feelings of the speaker very well. I love how you describe the wind. Wow. I wish I could write poems as breathtaking as yours.
1/25/2006 c1 some random person that doen't live up the street from u
oh me likie
oh me likie
1/25/2006 c1 ii
I like the poem. You have good spelling and a good control of the language. The only objection I have is the use of ampersands. It just looks better when you write out the word.
I like the poem. You have good spelling and a good control of the language. The only objection I have is the use of ampersands. It just looks better when you write out the word.