for mistake?2/13/2006 c1 
213Talhiri Serrano
Its a very interesting style and very powerful as well. I liked it, not in the morbid sense, but in other ways for the power it contains, etc...
213Talhiri SerranoIts a very interesting style and very powerful as well. I liked it, not in the morbid sense, but in other ways for the power it contains, etc...
2/13/2006 c1 194Aslan Israel
Wow. wicked. I think that was the first real (gosh I hate calling it this) 'cutting' poem I've ever actually felt like I was there. Not a lot of poetry wishy washy imagery (not that I have anything against that, but sometimes it's hard to get every little meaning)(I do it too) and I like it because it feels so alive. Bloody brilliant
whoops. wrong choice of words there (maybe?) ;-)
194Aslan IsraelWow. wicked. I think that was the first real (gosh I hate calling it this) 'cutting' poem I've ever actually felt like I was there. Not a lot of poetry wishy washy imagery (not that I have anything against that, but sometimes it's hard to get every little meaning)(I do it too) and I like it because it feels so alive. Bloody brilliant
whoops. wrong choice of words there (maybe?) ;-)
1/25/2006 c1 60finger on the trigger
ohgodsabove. do you know what you just did? you stopped my heart as i read your last lines. brilliant. so brilliant. don'tstop.
60finger on the triggerohgodsabove. do you know what you just did? you stopped my heart as i read your last lines. brilliant. so brilliant. don'tstop.
1/25/2006 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Such a complex and emotional roller coaster of a poem. The detail kept me on the edge of my seat. Well done, I really fell in love with this. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietSuch a complex and emotional roller coaster of a poem. The detail kept me on the edge of my seat. Well done, I really fell in love with this. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.