
1/27/2006 c1
858Anna178
I erally like this, and the image that 'midnight-orange teacup' idea really came across well to me, whether it was meant to be the way I visualized or not it made me smile in a sort of way. I can really feel that line, cause I'm the kind of person that would drink orange juice out of a teacup or have a teacup that could only be described as midnight-orange.
I really like how this poem shows how different people are, along with the reality it portrays.
The ending has a really real feeling to it as well, i can really understand whats its like to just want to kiss someone just once.
Simple poem, but well done.
ANNA

I erally like this, and the image that 'midnight-orange teacup' idea really came across well to me, whether it was meant to be the way I visualized or not it made me smile in a sort of way. I can really feel that line, cause I'm the kind of person that would drink orange juice out of a teacup or have a teacup that could only be described as midnight-orange.
I really like how this poem shows how different people are, along with the reality it portrays.
The ending has a really real feeling to it as well, i can really understand whats its like to just want to kiss someone just once.
Simple poem, but well done.
ANNA