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10/29/2008 c1 kampungboy
a truly beautiful poem

something i can really relate to
10/6/2006 c1 10Hell's first Icicle
o.O

wow.

*blinks* *blinks again*

"Is it wrong

To be a -dreamer-?

To look out the window,

Enveloped,

In the fantasies,

Of you and me?"

awesome. really. i love it.
3/13/2006 c1 22GjK
Hmm... interesting. I enjoyed this alot...and I can really identify.
3/8/2006 c1 59mysterieslady
Wow...that was really deep. And I don't usually mean that when I say it, but I do this time. I mean, it was really good. It's totally relatable, and maybe even a bit painful. You could almost visualize it like it was you. Very good. Awesome job!
2/20/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
There's a lovely voice in this. you really got your emotions across, and the parts in bold added emphasis on the questions. Good work
2/14/2006 c1 51Kusje
Ah, sweet sweet love.Hehe, a very cute but bitter poem.

I liked this.I loved how you portrayed tears 'crystal diamonds'good job.
1/27/2006 c1 27Hidden Lies
I love this poem! I know how that feels you ave done a wonderful job on this. Thankyou for the reveiw! XD
1/27/2006 c1 93EvT
I absolutely understand the way you feel. Just that mine has an additional factor of having a boyfriend as well. Ah well. No worries, I think this was pretty good. =) I like how you broke the sentences up to make it look more simple and clear. Keep up the great work! And thanks for the R&R! =)
1/26/2006 c1 20darkdesperation
I like this alot.. it reminds me how I felt A long while ago.. With the last relationship that I had...Very nice..Keep up the good work!

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