
1/10/2014 c1
1JasmineRaven
"You couldn't learn in the world in which you live, but the world you created in your mind." I love that line. Its beautiful. I love this poem! Dreams are so mysterious and confusing, and I think you portrayed that well in this poem.
Well done Neo! :)
Jaz

"You couldn't learn in the world in which you live, but the world you created in your mind." I love that line. Its beautiful. I love this poem! Dreams are so mysterious and confusing, and I think you portrayed that well in this poem.
Well done Neo! :)
Jaz
5/29/2007 c1
3Reomablue
Some say dreams is just fragment of the humans imaginative mind while some says that dream is one-thread away from reality.
Great stuff and I'd like you to know I enjoyed it.

Some say dreams is just fragment of the humans imaginative mind while some says that dream is one-thread away from reality.
Great stuff and I'd like you to know I enjoyed it.
2/11/2006 c1 FoxFire913
Dreams are my favorite topic in stories and poems, this is an extaordinary one!I think dreams are so mystical they can mean so many things to so many people. Ilove your peom!
Dreams are my favorite topic in stories and poems, this is an extaordinary one!I think dreams are so mystical they can mean so many things to so many people. Ilove your peom!
1/28/2006 c1
4somethingsup
Ah! This is terrific! (no one says that anymore, right?) Kind of profound with the last line there. 'But the world, you created in your mind!' That was my favorite. ^_^

Ah! This is terrific! (no one says that anymore, right?) Kind of profound with the last line there. 'But the world, you created in your mind!' That was my favorite. ^_^
1/26/2006 c1
20darkdesperation
Very cool.. and very true... I like this alot...keep up the good work!

Very cool.. and very true... I like this alot...keep up the good work!