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4/12/2006 c1 31poemkitten7
Wow, I like the rhythm and flow of the poem. Your writing style is very original. Keep up the great work! ^_^
1/26/2006 c1 16brokendreams21
The last line confused me. Maybe I need to think about this. But I loved the first word. And you used such beautiful metaphors! 'Life's laughter' I LOVE IT! Makes me happy despite the true meaning behind the poem. Fantastic! Keep up the great work!
1/26/2006 c1 Phantom
hmm, your talent shows in great patients. I understand the feelings that you disguise in your hidden messages.

Keep up the good work

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