for Through the Unknown Door3/12/2006 c1 pangur
I really really liked this one. It rhymed but it didn't seemed forced and you got the point across without compromising the flow. ...PS Thanks so much for reviewing my story Cadence.. it helps alot : ) I hope to see more from you. Keep it up! : )
I really really liked this one. It rhymed but it didn't seemed forced and you got the point across without compromising the flow. ...PS Thanks so much for reviewing my story Cadence.. it helps alot : ) I hope to see more from you. Keep it up! : )
2/20/2006 c1 
10PaintingTheSkyRed
Lol. Yes, it did remind of me of the song done by Maria Montell. Yet it was more appeal. The storyline was okay. Let me say one thing though, the mother seems to be a horrible mother. 0_o Letting her daughter leave like that but she says to never forget her. I wish my mother was like that. My mother would freak out if I ever thought of doing that. Nice job.
10PaintingTheSkyRedLol. Yes, it did remind of me of the song done by Maria Montell. Yet it was more appeal. The storyline was okay. Let me say one thing though, the mother seems to be a horrible mother. 0_o Letting her daughter leave like that but she says to never forget her. I wish my mother was like that. My mother would freak out if I ever thought of doing that. Nice job.
1/27/2006 c1 20Forgotten Pains
It's like a Dr. Suess in a grown up stage. Extremely amusing, I might add n.n I enjoyed how it could be read... the rhyming works, I'd love to see it illustrated.
((Ne, nagtataka lang po ako... kung bakit ganito ang napakiramdaman mo sa kanta na iyon...))
20Forgotten PainsIt's like a Dr. Suess in a grown up stage. Extremely amusing, I might add n.n I enjoyed how it could be read... the rhyming works, I'd love to see it illustrated.
((Ne, nagtataka lang po ako... kung bakit ganito ang napakiramdaman mo sa kanta na iyon...))