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8PencilSketchS
Everything seems to point to something calm and beautiful and gentle. The contrast makes the reality so much harsher in comparison. I like it.
8PencilSketchSEverything seems to point to something calm and beautiful and gentle. The contrast makes the reality so much harsher in comparison. I like it.
1/27/2006 c1 90Dragonzz
wow! I love it! Especially with the last line in there, it really wrapped it up nicely.
~dragonzz~
90Dragonzzwow! I love it! Especially with the last line in there, it really wrapped it up nicely.
~dragonzz~
1/27/2006 c1 70onlee me
Wow. That's really good I like it. You use a lot of sleeping terms to describe what you really mean, that's very creative.
70onlee meWow. That's really good I like it. You use a lot of sleeping terms to describe what you really mean, that's very creative.
1/27/2006 c1 14Guilty Dreams
I think it was pretty good. I love very simple and short stories that gets to the point but also carries a deep message. It just goes to show you - less is more.
14Guilty DreamsI think it was pretty good. I love very simple and short stories that gets to the point but also carries a deep message. It just goes to show you - less is more.
1/27/2006 c1 23Helena Evangelist
Nice. Loved it. A little short, but that's okay. Extremely beautiful, excellent work for your first posting.
-Miss Helena Black
23Helena EvangelistNice. Loved it. A little short, but that's okay. Extremely beautiful, excellent work for your first posting.
-Miss Helena Black
1/27/2006 c1 2Safiya-Nashad
Peaceful death...that's what I want after death. No heaven, no hell just...rest.
Loved the imagery.
2Safiya-NashadPeaceful death...that's what I want after death. No heaven, no hell just...rest.
Loved the imagery.