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7/8/2010 c24 peachpie1200
DUDE! this story is epic. I love the nickname thomas gives esther. XD it's indeed, adorable. I really hope you havent stopped this story. i await your update with excitment.
4/20/2008 c1 Rina Fukuda
This was really good! u need to make another story following this one. can't wait to read it.
12/3/2007 c24 SuperCUTEJensen
i have just found your story and i love it...cant wait to see what happens next...hope you update soon
9/14/2007 c9 4Nicole Deming
I like your story and I am looking forward to reading the rest.
9/3/2007 c3 xbluxmoonx
nice chappies and a coolio beginning. the school must be prestigious or something. other than cowen, i've never heard of teenagers talk so clearly- same goes with the teachers. weird. lol. other than that, i like your writing and doing a great job and all. ^_^
9/2/2007 c24 xxxxxxxdeadaccount
Keep going Keep going keep going!
8/25/2007 c2 34RhythmOfMySoul
LOL! Great ending to a wonderful chapter!
8/16/2007 c1 32InnerBeauty507
Great STory!

I feel so sad for Ester!

But i really hope now since she was open about it that shell open up more

and we can hear more crazy stories from her past

Loe it!

and cant wait for the enxt update!
8/14/2007 c24 Faking Cinderella
Yay! I love your story, which I recently stumbled apon, and I am EAGERLY awaiting the next chapter! Hopefully it will be out soon? And I can't wait until things with Cowen and Thomas start to heat up. Muhahahaha!
8/13/2007 c24 hopelessromantic444
wow just finished catching up and omg your story is amazing! can't wait for the next chapter!
8/12/2007 c24 15A.Myers
Hurray! You finally updated. I've been wondering when you would. I was afraid you had lost interest or had decided to discontinue, which I'm glad to see isn't true. Writing blocks can really suck, but what's worse is when you lose your inspiration to write. I've been there, recently actually, and believe me, it's *not* fun.

I liked the chapter, although it was a bit confusing since it's been a while between chapters. One thing you might consider doing is adding a recap at the beginning of each chapter, like what they do at the start of TV shows: "Previously on..." It would be a nice of refreshing your readers.

How long are you planning on making this story? Not that I'm in a hurry to see it finished, but I'm getting the feel its maybe...half way done? It just seems like there's so much more to come.

Is this the first time we've met Erica? I don't remember her in previous chapters. Maybe add a sentence or two telling who she is. You demonstrated really good why Thomas doesn't like her or at least what happens when/how she gets him to talk when he doesn't want too.

Still love the interaction between Thomas and Esther. Unfortunately there wasn't much in this chapter, but there was enough. Also that brief interaction between Thomas and Cowen. *Shudder* I'd really hate to have him for a brother.

It'd be an interesting experience if Thomas does bring Esther over for tea and Cowen drops by. He still wants her.

Anyway, keep up the great and awesome work. I'm glad to see that you've updated and am looking forward to your next update.

Regards,

A.Myers
8/12/2007 c24 1dawn's unforgiving darkness
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intense
6/3/2007 c23 dawn's unforgiving darkness
its 2007

no updates?
4/26/2007 c23 Izzy Iccey
nice story. plz update soon.
3/11/2007 c23 ANGEL992210
I really like this so I hope you update soon.
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