8/26/2012 c1 adventuresinc
Nice intro , I was thinking the title my self and Google it and came across this story. amazing how Brain thinks and connected through other people like drawing to connect the missing dots
Nice intro , I was thinking the title my self and Google it and came across this story. amazing how Brain thinks and connected through other people like drawing to connect the missing dots
10/23/2006 c7 bex
woot i'm in ur story! harley does like ya now! gd work keep it up lol
woot i'm in ur story! harley does like ya now! gd work keep it up lol
7/6/2006 c1 39CynicalValentine98
Hey, great first chapter. I'll have to read the rest later when I get back in three days. So hopefully you can hold out on your impatience for that short amount of time, stay away from plastic spoons and Antony, and not think about castration, =P. Thanks for the reviews by the way. Anyways, I'm in a hurry, so great first chapter. You're a really good writer.
Katie
Hey, great first chapter. I'll have to read the rest later when I get back in three days. So hopefully you can hold out on your impatience for that short amount of time, stay away from plastic spoons and Antony, and not think about castration, =P. Thanks for the reviews by the way. Anyways, I'm in a hurry, so great first chapter. You're a really good writer.
Katie
6/23/2006 c7 2Princess of Fyre
This story is great. I love all the weird random stuff in it. Probably because I do stuff like that sometimes too.
I totally love the charachter of Alex. He's really interesting. I'd love to find out more about him and his family.
It's so sad that this is getting put on hold. But you gotta do what you gotta do.
This story is great. I love all the weird random stuff in it. Probably because I do stuff like that sometimes too.
I totally love the charachter of Alex. He's really interesting. I'd love to find out more about him and his family.
It's so sad that this is getting put on hold. But you gotta do what you gotta do.
6/22/2006 c7 3the lodger
yet another good read by Nat!xellent work and keep it up! plz!
(shame i woznt in it thogh!)
yet another good read by Nat!xellent work and keep it up! plz!
(shame i woznt in it thogh!)
6/21/2006 c7 Shiney Sianey
fyn! i take bak wot i sed aboot Nathan. so lemme guess,tom based on mike by any chance? everything points dat way! keep writing! luvin it babes!
fyn! i take bak wot i sed aboot Nathan. so lemme guess,tom based on mike by any chance? everything points dat way! keep writing! luvin it babes!
6/20/2006 c7 8Out-Spoken-Runaway
Chocolate is NASTY. I absolutely HATE chocolate. Don't ask why...it's just like that.
AWESOME STORY! xD Sounds like Adam's stalking her...or maybe she's subconciously (spelling?) stalking him. Or maybe the music is just getting to my head. xD Keep writing.
IceCold13
Chocolate is NASTY. I absolutely HATE chocolate. Don't ask why...it's just like that.
AWESOME STORY! xD Sounds like Adam's stalking her...or maybe she's subconciously (spelling?) stalking him. Or maybe the music is just getting to my head. xD Keep writing.
IceCold13
6/19/2006 c7 22IAmPwnSizzle
nice, i especialy like the way im shown...i just no im funny...andnthe bit about gregs thought process...i don't know how he puts up with you...
nice, i especialy like the way im shown...i just no im funny...andnthe bit about gregs thought process...i don't know how he puts up with you...
6/8/2006 c6 Vonnie
hey nati rli like ur story it well gd!lv vonnie
hey nati rli like ur story it well gd!lv vonnie
5/15/2006 c6 4Ck90
I do love fudge especially on a brownie! *drools on the computer* And it is true my siblings did drop me or more like watched me roll of the bed when my mom left me in their care, then she came and she did not see me, when she asked them, they said they watched me fall of the bed! Siblings! Well anyway Tom is an ass! And I understand about the exams I'm going through finals right now andthey are hell! I hate them! Teachers keep using old and improved methods to torture us poor creatures who are blessed (cursed) with a brain.
I do love fudge especially on a brownie! *drools on the computer* And it is true my siblings did drop me or more like watched me roll of the bed when my mom left me in their care, then she came and she did not see me, when she asked them, they said they watched me fall of the bed! Siblings! Well anyway Tom is an ass! And I understand about the exams I'm going through finals right now andthey are hell! I hate them! Teachers keep using old and improved methods to torture us poor creatures who are blessed (cursed) with a brain.
5/15/2006 c6 Shiney Sianey
hey i finally read it! its v good, specially the bit with me innit lol lol!tom's an asshole! i've decided!adam sounds gorgeous, but y wood he work wit Nathan ew! ur Leah iz exactly the same in reel lyfe! spot on description!
hey i finally read it! its v good, specially the bit with me innit lol lol!tom's an asshole! i've decided!adam sounds gorgeous, but y wood he work wit Nathan ew! ur Leah iz exactly the same in reel lyfe! spot on description!
5/11/2006 c6 22IAmPwnSizzle
yes, exams, school and the lack of modern day miricales are st00pid. but your missing the point of mums, which is to annoy you until you say you'll never grown up to be like them, but to sow the seeds of doubt of how bad they where until you becomer exactly like them. we can all have dreams...and guns. oh well, back to the drudgery of evrydasy l.ife, until i get my next rittalin hit...then all will be well.
yes, exams, school and the lack of modern day miricales are st00pid. but your missing the point of mums, which is to annoy you until you say you'll never grown up to be like them, but to sow the seeds of doubt of how bad they where until you becomer exactly like them. we can all have dreams...and guns. oh well, back to the drudgery of evrydasy l.ife, until i get my next rittalin hit...then all will be well.
4/16/2006 c5 Andrew Clements
Hey Nat, this story is amazing. Well done. I thoroughly (or however u spell it) enjoyed it! WELL DONE :) :D
Hey Nat, this story is amazing. Well done. I thoroughly (or however u spell it) enjoyed it! WELL DONE :) :D