1/25/2011 c17 6FoodStamps1
YES! JASON IS IN JAIL!:D AND JIMMY'S OK!:D:D:D:DD:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
YES! JASON IS IN JAIL!:D AND JIMMY'S OK!:D:D:D:DD:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
1/24/2011 c15 FoodStamps1
wow... this just gets funnier... i still luv it unfortunately its 12:40 a.m so i must be going i will finishe the series tomorrow
wow... this just gets funnier... i still luv it unfortunately its 12:40 a.m so i must be going i will finishe the series tomorrow
1/24/2011 c3 FoodStamps1
I know I haven't reveiwed the last two chapters but thats because i was eager for the nxt chp. I love this thing its for one funny and for two suspicious. do put more
I know I haven't reveiwed the last two chapters but thats because i was eager for the nxt chp. I love this thing its for one funny and for two suspicious. do put more
1/5/2011 c6 2mikitastic
I came across this fanfic yesterday and I can't stop reading it.
I'm still on Chapter 6, but I HAD to write a review.
The story is quite good, with some cliches, as usual.
But there is something really bothering me about this fanfic.
She learns she has a stalker, and on the same day, she meets him, kisses him, without even knowing HIM.
If I was Rachel, I would freak out. She knew someone was sneaking in her house, but it wasn't a big deal for her?
I'm not trying to write only negative opinion. I quite like this story. But I think you rushed things. Everything happened so fast. I don't believe you can fall for someone in only one day.
I wished you had developed their relationship more. I was hoping that Rachel would only find out who Jimmy was in the end. As for now, that is my only "complaint": that things went too fast.
As I have said before, I am still reading Chapter 6. When I finish reading the whole fanfic, I might as well write another review.
I came across this fanfic yesterday and I can't stop reading it.
I'm still on Chapter 6, but I HAD to write a review.
The story is quite good, with some cliches, as usual.
But there is something really bothering me about this fanfic.
She learns she has a stalker, and on the same day, she meets him, kisses him, without even knowing HIM.
If I was Rachel, I would freak out. She knew someone was sneaking in her house, but it wasn't a big deal for her?
I'm not trying to write only negative opinion. I quite like this story. But I think you rushed things. Everything happened so fast. I don't believe you can fall for someone in only one day.
I wished you had developed their relationship more. I was hoping that Rachel would only find out who Jimmy was in the end. As for now, that is my only "complaint": that things went too fast.
As I have said before, I am still reading Chapter 6. When I finish reading the whole fanfic, I might as well write another review.
11/24/2010 c1 happinie93
Wow! This is a really really really good story so far. And I'm so glad that it's completed because that way I can just keep on reading! With the occasional reviews. And I like the idea for the story too!
Wow! This is a really really really good story so far. And I'm so glad that it's completed because that way I can just keep on reading! With the occasional reviews. And I like the idea for the story too!