Just In
for A Stalker? Watching Me? No Way

1/28/2006 c2 1FamousOneLiners
1/28/2006 c2 Ladededa
o i love this story! its so descriptive and when u read it, it makes u feel like yur actually in the story. it actually makes me feel like im in it 2 bcuz my name is also rachel. i like the IM conversation and jimmy is awesome! update soon!
1/28/2006 c2 2Jayn
Pretty interestubg. Please update. ^_^
1/27/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
Hm...very interesting story you got going here. The thoughts that ran through my mind was why the stalker was after Rachel and not Jasmine...probably when Rachel's thinking too, huh? You have to update this, it's real good. Oh and try to cut down on your short sentences. :D
1/27/2006 c1 twdbot

Nice start, but [I don't know if it's just me] I think it would be great if you added more to your story. Like sentence/paragraph-wise. Actually, no. Don't listen to me.

I like this the way it is.

Sorry for being fickle, haha.

Great idea, by the way. Freaky how Rachael's stalker can break in.
1/27/2006 c1 1KittyKittyKittenz
Good taste in music... Look forward to reading more ^^
1/27/2006 c1 Ladededa
o this storys cute! i think it has great potential and i cant wait for another update!
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