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5/26/2007 c1 5colorfulcharcoal
it's beautiful and elegantly written!

check out my poems if you have the time..and interest..xD

Keep up the good work!
1/15/2007 c1 1Heartscryer
I liked thsi bit: "And so she bleeds / Inside" "And so inside / she cries"

It really touched me
12/15/2006 c1 FromEastToWest
This felt so real it made me shuder.

:/
3/13/2006 c1 22GjK
I really like this poem... especially the last stanza "Her eyes bu, two black holes, of eternal darkness, and so inside, she cries."

Good stuff. Hope to hear more.
2/14/2006 c1 51Kusje
Hm. We all in our lives should always write a poem like this. And I've had my shares as well.

Good job on expressing your feelings through this.

I thought it was a very unique way of writing and I loved it.

Keep it up.
1/29/2006 c1 13Fang3h
Wonderful. You have done a great job portraying her emotion! Thank you for your review.
1/27/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
Good capture of emotion. My favourite line in this is 'once a perfectionist, and now perfecting her hate' very storng line, keep it up
1/27/2006 c1 2Safiya-Nashad
O_O Wonderful imagery. It's almost as if the reader IS the little girl, can feel her pain. -nods- Well done.
1/27/2006 c1 20zaide koizumi
It's amazing how you could pick very few words and weave them all into a wonderfully written peice. There is so much emotion. I hope that you are not writing about yourself for it would be a very sad thing.Please write again. I am looking forward to reading more of your works.

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