for Her Foreign Skin9/3/2007 c1 
56Luna Turner
I like this poem. It's mysterious and powerful. That's a VERY good quality to have in poetry. Excellent job. I love the direction this piece went. Once again, excellent.
56Luna TurnerI like this poem. It's mysterious and powerful. That's a VERY good quality to have in poetry. Excellent job. I love the direction this piece went. Once again, excellent.
2/7/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Comes across well as a delicate scene. You make fresh-original descriptions to get your theme across. Good work.
879Moondog DozierComes across well as a delicate scene. You make fresh-original descriptions to get your theme across. Good work.
1/29/2006 c1 27Hidden Lies
Wow, I love this poem. Just the simplicity of it, it is truly beautiful!
Thanks for the reveiw, I shall take what you said on board for my next poem.
27Hidden LiesWow, I love this poem. Just the simplicity of it, it is truly beautiful!
Thanks for the reveiw, I shall take what you said on board for my next poem.
1/28/2006 c1 104FunkyFlower
cool ending. i luv the imagery and altho short, it fits well together. great job!
x~mez~x
104FunkyFlowercool ending. i luv the imagery and altho short, it fits well together. great job!
x~mez~x
1/28/2006 c1 Lauren Wolfe
Soft, harmonious...i like this. Very good! ^.^
Soft, harmonious...i like this. Very good! ^.^