
1/6/2007 c1
15Banshee Junior
This haiku trickles well, just like your waterfall. I've only recently learnt about and started consciously reading them, so I can't really resist one when I see it. Somehow the word 'water' just flows all too well with 'beautiful'!

This haiku trickles well, just like your waterfall. I've only recently learnt about and started consciously reading them, so I can't really resist one when I see it. Somehow the word 'water' just flows all too well with 'beautiful'!
11/2/2006 c5
49ignominy
i like sunshine and outside the best. their discriptive and have a nice beat. you seem to be a fan of haikus, huh? :)

i like sunshine and outside the best. their discriptive and have a nice beat. you seem to be a fan of haikus, huh? :)
10/10/2006 c5
1yellow dalek
N little things. Tey are all correct! (i went through counting the sylabbles. i'm really sad in that sort of way.)Will you put any more poems on?
bye
YElLoW DaLEK

N little things. Tey are all correct! (i went through counting the sylabbles. i'm really sad in that sort of way.)Will you put any more poems on?
bye
YElLoW DaLEK
6/1/2006 c4
100Abby Sequioa
ok, sorry if I sound rude and all, but there was one review to this collection that I'd like to counter. This poet used the word beautiful only TWICE, in five poems. plus, these are amazing poems.just wanted to say that, sorry about the rudeness

ok, sorry if I sound rude and all, but there was one review to this collection that I'd like to counter. This poet used the word beautiful only TWICE, in five poems. plus, these are amazing poems.just wanted to say that, sorry about the rudeness
6/1/2006 c1 Abby Sequioa
so peaceful and serene... I love it!(I updated Highschool by the way, if you wanted to know)~keep writing
so peaceful and serene... I love it!(I updated Highschool by the way, if you wanted to know)~keep writing