for Haiku4/25/2006 c5 
33subliminalsquirrel
ok, I'mma be straight honest; these are some horrible haikus, everybody who has given reviews either lied or tried to b nice; haiku is not just a random couple words making 14 syllables in this straightforward and trite manner that u have done; these are not haikus; these are just random hackneyed sentences or phrases that u so mislabeled as "haiku"; there is no special image invoked from these; there is no focus n feeling of singular, intensified moment; the word "beautiful" has been used buzzilion time in such a vague manner, for instance; try again; pick powerful words and connect them in as compelling manner, instead of just giving random generalized statements.
33subliminalsquirrelok, I'mma be straight honest; these are some horrible haikus, everybody who has given reviews either lied or tried to b nice; haiku is not just a random couple words making 14 syllables in this straightforward and trite manner that u have done; these are not haikus; these are just random hackneyed sentences or phrases that u so mislabeled as "haiku"; there is no special image invoked from these; there is no focus n feeling of singular, intensified moment; the word "beautiful" has been used buzzilion time in such a vague manner, for instance; try again; pick powerful words and connect them in as compelling manner, instead of just giving random generalized statements.
3/7/2006 c3 Galadh Niniel
Beautiful there is an element of mystery in the poem itself, the reader wonders what kind of creature exactly it is. I was thinking of a phoenix, but perhaps that's only an association suggested by Harry Potter. ;-)
Beautiful there is an element of mystery in the poem itself, the reader wonders what kind of creature exactly it is. I was thinking of a phoenix, but perhaps that's only an association suggested by Harry Potter. ;-)
2/21/2006 c5 37Diane Lynn
I loved some of the haikus in this collection. Some of them were very beautiful and at the same time, they said so much. I think that that is a job that is hard to do with haiku. I would have liked to have seen some kind of theme underlying the collection though. Otherwise, job well done. Thanks for the review btw.
37Diane LynnI loved some of the haikus in this collection. Some of them were very beautiful and at the same time, they said so much. I think that that is a job that is hard to do with haiku. I would have liked to have seen some kind of theme underlying the collection though. Otherwise, job well done. Thanks for the review btw.
2/17/2006 c5 7Teufel66
Hey there. You have a nice collection here, these poems create wonderful images. simplicity is delicate. i enjoyed them.
-Teufel
7Teufel66Hey there. You have a nice collection here, these poems create wonderful images. simplicity is delicate. i enjoyed them.
-Teufel