for Secrets of Love10/7/2006 c1 
91fairytale failure
Actually I think the beginning of this poem is pretty much the best thing you have written. It is a bit more like free verse but with rhyme. The last stanza, though, gets a little bit silly.
91fairytale failureActually I think the beginning of this poem is pretty much the best thing you have written. It is a bit more like free verse but with rhyme. The last stanza, though, gets a little bit silly.
2/15/2006 c1 angelicdust
aw. thats such a sweet lil poem..its so chwet...gr8 rhyming..uve got real style btw...how do u get those lil heartz...? gr8 job once agin!~!
aw. thats such a sweet lil poem..its so chwet...gr8 rhyming..uve got real style btw...how do u get those lil heartz...? gr8 job once agin!~!
2/10/2006 c1 47Eve Amare
This is prety right on for making it up. I would have never guess that you didn't feel something strong to write this. Well done,
As Always,Eve
47Eve AmareThis is prety right on for making it up. I would have never guess that you didn't feel something strong to write this. Well done,
As Always,Eve
2/4/2006 c1 3Glassed Rose
Gosh! My favorite stanza was:
"That certain sparkle in your eyes
The way you laugh, the way you cry.
I think you're cute, and I can't lie,
So please don't walk away this time."
That was so cute! Great poem!
-Glassed Rose
3Glassed RoseGosh! My favorite stanza was:
"That certain sparkle in your eyes
The way you laugh, the way you cry.
I think you're cute, and I can't lie,
So please don't walk away this time."
That was so cute! Great poem!
-Glassed Rose
1/31/2006 c1 199Saeger
That's cute. ^^ Thanks for all the reviews! The italicized wrods seemd to have some stress to them, sometimes, but others it threw me off... Was there an actual reason behind them? ANYway, neat poem!
199SaegerThat's cute. ^^ Thanks for all the reviews! The italicized wrods seemd to have some stress to them, sometimes, but others it threw me off... Was there an actual reason behind them? ANYway, neat poem!
1/30/2006 c1 30Sarah Rizal
Oh i just love this poem its so sweet , so romantic and i love the rymings. Very nicely written.
30Sarah RizalOh i just love this poem its so sweet , so romantic and i love the rymings. Very nicely written.
1/29/2006 c1 13scriblets1an2
That is a beautiful poem. it really fit quite well. Keep up the good work!
13scriblets1an2That is a beautiful poem. it really fit quite well. Keep up the good work!
1/28/2006 c1 Lyn Kinsei
That was nice. I liked it. It had a good rhyme, and a sort of beat that I could keep in my head. I think that is rythm, right? Sorry it is late and I can't remember much right now, but I know that was good.^_^,Aimee.
That was nice. I liked it. It had a good rhyme, and a sort of beat that I could keep in my head. I think that is rythm, right? Sorry it is late and I can't remember much right now, but I know that was good.^_^,Aimee.
1/28/2006 c1 16brokendreams21
The hearts inbetween each stanza add a nice touch. Aw. It's such a nice love poem, yet so sad. *sniff* I hate it when things like these happen. Ah well. Such is life. Another job well done!
16brokendreams21The hearts inbetween each stanza add a nice touch. Aw. It's such a nice love poem, yet so sad. *sniff* I hate it when things like these happen. Ah well. Such is life. Another job well done!
1/28/2006 c1 1Kellyy
OMG! sarah! thats awesome! i LOVE! that poem! its like the BEST ONE i've ever read! wow! HOLY GEEZ!
-kelly
1KellyyOMG! sarah! thats awesome! i LOVE! that poem! its like the BEST ONE i've ever read! wow! HOLY GEEZ!
-kelly
1/28/2006 c1 270queenvixta
This is really good, I really like the formatting. The second stanza was my fave. Great poem! QueenVixta
270queenvixtaThis is really good, I really like the formatting. The second stanza was my fave. Great poem! QueenVixta