Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for The Dove

11/17/2008 c1 16MadamWriterGal
I think that the dove was a beautiful metaphor for death. I love this poem.
1/9/2007 c1 31Suicidal Romance
wow, i like how you used two different points-of-view to describe ugliness in beauty...hey! that would make a good poem name! ugliness in beauty! haha!..sorree! getting sidetracked again!
11/18/2006 c1 5Ladiebug
I like it. Nice imagery.
4/21/2006 c1 B34utifulDr34mer
k i dont think i got this poem before but now i think i understand. its nice, sorry i cant say much more, dont know the poetry lingo.
3/9/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
This was so sweet and inspirational, I really loved it. I absolutely loved these lines I felt like i was connected to you by them."As I buried it, I found that my hands

were fragile and cold.

And realized that I've suddenly

become so old."

The ending was sweet and wonderful, I loved this it is going on my favorites.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.
2/2/2006 c1 2The Big Pimpin Pimple
very creative...hm the other reviewers are right it is very thought provoking...

is the black dove a symbol of the grim reaper?
1/28/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
Wow, that was def. different but very powerful! I especially loved the ending! Keep up the great work!
1/28/2006 c1 35Live4Love
unique. i liked it.Tiffany
1/28/2006 c1 review
scary and deep. thought provoking.
1/28/2006 c1 70Maisha Mafuriko
M This writing you have penned... thot provokingly good

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service