for The Dove11/17/2008 c1 
16MadamWriterGal
I think that the dove was a beautiful metaphor for death. I love this poem.
16MadamWriterGalI think that the dove was a beautiful metaphor for death. I love this poem.
1/9/2007 c1 31Suicidal Romance
wow, i like how you used two different points-of-view to describe ugliness in beauty...hey! that would make a good poem name! ugliness in beauty! haha!..sorree! getting sidetracked again!
31Suicidal Romancewow, i like how you used two different points-of-view to describe ugliness in beauty...hey! that would make a good poem name! ugliness in beauty! haha!..sorree! getting sidetracked again!
4/21/2006 c1 B34utifulDr34mer
k i dont think i got this poem before but now i think i understand. its nice, sorry i cant say much more, dont know the poetry lingo.
k i dont think i got this poem before but now i think i understand. its nice, sorry i cant say much more, dont know the poetry lingo.
3/9/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
This was so sweet and inspirational, I really loved it. I absolutely loved these lines I felt like i was connected to you by them."As I buried it, I found that my hands
were fragile and cold.
And realized that I've suddenly
become so old."
The ending was sweet and wonderful, I loved this it is going on my favorites.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.
197the Stranger in the moonlightThis was so sweet and inspirational, I really loved it. I absolutely loved these lines I felt like i was connected to you by them."As I buried it, I found that my hands
were fragile and cold.
And realized that I've suddenly
become so old."
The ending was sweet and wonderful, I loved this it is going on my favorites.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.
2/2/2006 c1 2The Big Pimpin Pimple
very creative...hm the other reviewers are right it is very thought provoking...
is the black dove a symbol of the grim reaper?
2The Big Pimpin Pimplevery creative...hm the other reviewers are right it is very thought provoking...
is the black dove a symbol of the grim reaper?
1/28/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
Wow, that was def. different but very powerful! I especially loved the ending! Keep up the great work!
Wow, that was def. different but very powerful! I especially loved the ending! Keep up the great work!