
4/26/2006 c1
34Ethereal Kisses
Hey again,
The title made me laugh although the actual content isn't much to laugh about. I like the feeling of rough anger behind the almost polite denial, and I know so many people who manipulate people like you've described in here.
~ Ethereal Kisses ~

Hey again,
The title made me laugh although the actual content isn't much to laugh about. I like the feeling of rough anger behind the almost polite denial, and I know so many people who manipulate people like you've described in here.
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
4/6/2006 c1
50Kristina Suko
Oh, if someone did that to me... it's so good, so cruel to the sweetheart- love the last stanza

Oh, if someone did that to me... it's so good, so cruel to the sweetheart- love the last stanza
2/13/2006 c1 toxic-noodle725
oh! like the theme of this. very creative. and i love love love the ending...makes me wanna say that to someone. mwahahahaahahah! yea im a dork i know. but so's everybody else!:)oh and thanx 4 ur review. appreciate it! ~The Noodle
oh! like the theme of this. very creative. and i love love love the ending...makes me wanna say that to someone. mwahahahaahahah! yea im a dork i know. but so's everybody else!:)oh and thanx 4 ur review. appreciate it! ~The Noodle
2/10/2006 c1
135Ron A. Liner
I like how you kept this poem nice and simple, someone could have really went overboard with it. I can really relate to this too, I've felt that way about a "knight" so many times.

I like how you kept this poem nice and simple, someone could have really went overboard with it. I can really relate to this too, I've felt that way about a "knight" so many times.
2/5/2006 c1 Desi Pixie
I am going to steal this, Copyright you, and put it on my Xanga because you are so pro.
I adore you, this is wonderful once again.
Jaan
I am going to steal this, Copyright you, and put it on my Xanga because you are so pro.
I adore you, this is wonderful once again.
Jaan