for Reflection10/19/2006 c1 Timpkins
Oh my god thats good, it almost made me cry in all honesty. I know the feeling.
P.S. thanks for the review
Love Letty
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Oh my god thats good, it almost made me cry in all honesty. I know the feeling.
P.S. thanks for the review
Love Letty
X
4/10/2006 c1 
34Smoky Bear
aw, man i know that feeling... well crafted poem, it's really good. nice one.
34Smoky Bearaw, man i know that feeling... well crafted poem, it's really good. nice one.
3/9/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
You have changed for the worst and your true self has abandoned you. that's what I understand from reading this poem.
It was really good and true about how we lose ourselves through the years.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.
197the Stranger in the moonlightYou have changed for the worst and your true self has abandoned you. that's what I understand from reading this poem.
It was really good and true about how we lose ourselves through the years.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.
2/16/2006 c1 21Khiranna
It's kind of sad, but I understand it. I like it, and I usually am not a big fan of free verse stuff.
21KhirannaIt's kind of sad, but I understand it. I like it, and I usually am not a big fan of free verse stuff.
2/15/2006 c1 2callmebelle
I don't always love rhyming, but I thought that it worked beautifully with this. Phenomenal job :)
2callmebelleI don't always love rhyming, but I thought that it worked beautifully with this. Phenomenal job :)
2/5/2006 c1 Herminia
This is very well written. I liked the rhythem: it flowed very smoothly, like a song. Well done!
This is very well written. I liked the rhythem: it flowed very smoothly, like a song. Well done!
2/2/2006 c1 2The Big Pimpin Pimple
Oh...this is the one u were talking bout...I like it...ure right it is freaky and scary
It's like losing yourself and you can't have that old thing back...you know what I mean (it it doesn't well too bad it made sense in my head)
2The Big Pimpin PimpleOh...this is the one u were talking bout...I like it...ure right it is freaky and scary
It's like losing yourself and you can't have that old thing back...you know what I mean (it it doesn't well too bad it made sense in my head)
1/28/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
AW...so sad! I like how you twisted it to be your own reflection! Wonderful job!
AW...so sad! I like how you twisted it to be your own reflection! Wonderful job!