for This Is My Paradise10/8/2006 c1 
197riotmaker
i love the repetition and the way you completely capture the moment.
[& i wanted to say that while i very much appreciate your review and take it to heart, that poem wasn't really meant to be anything but crude & if you find that that disturbs you than don't bother reading it. because that's my life in a poem, & i'm keeping it that way.]
197riotmakeri love the repetition and the way you completely capture the moment.
[& i wanted to say that while i very much appreciate your review and take it to heart, that poem wasn't really meant to be anything but crude & if you find that that disturbs you than don't bother reading it. because that's my life in a poem, & i'm keeping it that way.]
10/6/2006 c1 9Sakura Taking
This place sounds very nice. I like it...if only we could find a place like this. Great work!
9Sakura TakingThis place sounds very nice. I like it...if only we could find a place like this. Great work!
9/5/2006 c1 32Mind Barrier
Nicely done, yet...dreams are only a figment of our imaginations, yet if they could be real... Joe Asher
32Mind BarrierNicely done, yet...dreams are only a figment of our imaginations, yet if they could be real... Joe Asher
5/9/2006 c1 57Literary-lycos
I love it! it flows really nicely and takes me out of my self ( if that makes any sense at all) lol but anyway. Keep it going!
57Literary-lycosI love it! it flows really nicely and takes me out of my self ( if that makes any sense at all) lol but anyway. Keep it going!
4/14/2006 c1 196Damaged
^_^ Beautiful imagery! It puts me on the beaches of Fiji or Australia. Absolutely beautiful!
196Damaged^_^ Beautiful imagery! It puts me on the beaches of Fiji or Australia. Absolutely beautiful!
2/24/2006 c1 19Kat-Renee Kittel
I love the ocean... I wouldn't want to leave either. I can hear the seagull and see the children playing.
Thanks for reviewing Windsong. Sorry so long in replying - just found the email about your review (lots and lots of emails in my inbox). How did you find my poem, by the way? ^..^
19Kat-Renee KittelI love the ocean... I wouldn't want to leave either. I can hear the seagull and see the children playing.
Thanks for reviewing Windsong. Sorry so long in replying - just found the email about your review (lots and lots of emails in my inbox). How did you find my poem, by the way? ^..^
2/18/2006 c1 64Leeona Trance
O, I like this imagery... makes me miss the beach, even though I know when I get there I just want to leave again. Good poem with strong imagery.
~Leeona Trance
64Leeona TranceO, I like this imagery... makes me miss the beach, even though I know when I get there I just want to leave again. Good poem with strong imagery.
~Leeona Trance
2/1/2006 c1 24Searching4Truth
It seems like a beautiful place. The way you described it made me want to be anywhere but here in the middle of another cold winter. :-) Very interesting format. I really like the way the poem as a whole looks when you read it...
Great job! Keep writing! :-)
P.S. Thank you for your nice review!
24Searching4TruthIt seems like a beautiful place. The way you described it made me want to be anywhere but here in the middle of another cold winter. :-) Very interesting format. I really like the way the poem as a whole looks when you read it...
Great job! Keep writing! :-)
P.S. Thank you for your nice review!