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10/8/2006 c1 197riotmaker
i love the repetition and the way you completely capture the moment.

[& i wanted to say that while i very much appreciate your review and take it to heart, that poem wasn't really meant to be anything but crude & if you find that that disturbs you than don't bother reading it. because that's my life in a poem, & i'm keeping it that way.]
10/6/2006 c1 9Sakura Taking
This place sounds very nice. I like it...if only we could find a place like this. Great work!
9/30/2006 c1 16SachiSachi
Aww! Love! And the way it's typed is very cool.
9/30/2006 c1 polka dots and addictions
v nicely written. Again, lovely imaginary.
9/5/2006 c1 32Mind Barrier
Nicely done, yet...dreams are only a figment of our imaginations, yet if they could be real... Joe Asher
5/9/2006 c1 57Literary-lycos
I love it! it flows really nicely and takes me out of my self ( if that makes any sense at all) lol but anyway. Keep it going!
4/14/2006 c1 196Damaged
^_^ Beautiful imagery! It puts me on the beaches of Fiji or Australia. Absolutely beautiful!
2/24/2006 c1 19Kat-Renee Kittel
I love the ocean... I wouldn't want to leave either. I can hear the seagull and see the children playing.

Thanks for reviewing Windsong. Sorry so long in replying - just found the email about your review (lots and lots of emails in my inbox). How did you find my poem, by the way? ^..^
2/18/2006 c1 64Leeona Trance
O, I like this imagery... makes me miss the beach, even though I know when I get there I just want to leave again. Good poem with strong imagery.

~Leeona Trance
2/6/2006 c1 237classic violet
Aw, pretty!
2/1/2006 c1 24Searching4Truth
It seems like a beautiful place. The way you described it made me want to be anywhere but here in the middle of another cold winter. :-) Very interesting format. I really like the way the poem as a whole looks when you read it...

Great job! Keep writing! :-)

P.S. Thank you for your nice review!
1/31/2006 c1 199Saeger
Good imagery and description. I used to live in Florida- just a few minutes from the beach. It is nice, usually. Really, great job! I like it.
1/30/2006 c1 35Live4Love
the imagery is amazing. Tiffany
1/30/2006 c1 16acethehunted
great rhyme, good description, and interesting poem
1/30/2006 c1 27Persufala
Hm...interesting. the emphasis on certain words has an intriging effect. your dream world comes to life before us and its quite vivid.
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