4/10/2006 c3 3Bravado Pirate
Really good so far! Keep going, 'cause I can't wait for the next chapter...
Really good so far! Keep going, 'cause I can't wait for the next chapter...
2/22/2006 c3 city of the dead
you have to update this it is so good. I love this story. Spike is really interesting and i want to know what happened to Daniels. Very good writing please update soon
you have to update this it is so good. I love this story. Spike is really interesting and i want to know what happened to Daniels. Very good writing please update soon
2/20/2006 c3 Kristen
Ooh! I really like... please keep going, and soon!
Ooh! I really like... please keep going, and soon!
1/31/2006 c1 megan bainbridge
okay constering my best friend wrote this for me and kitty i whould like to say a cuple of things is one i love you pinky aka(caitlen) you are my best friend and two i love how you used are every day life into your story and three im glad me and kitty were in your story i truely love that you think about us ^.^ love yafoxy
okay constering my best friend wrote this for me and kitty i whould like to say a cuple of things is one i love you pinky aka(caitlen) you are my best friend and two i love how you used are every day life into your story and three im glad me and kitty were in your story i truely love that you think about us ^.^ love yafoxy
1/31/2006 c2 sorry don't have FP account
Umm so this is a really good start for your story. I can't wait to find more about Spike. Your characterization, my favorite aspect of any story, seems really strong and your plot line, even though no much has happened yet seems good. keep it up!
Umm so this is a really good start for your story. I can't wait to find more about Spike. Your characterization, my favorite aspect of any story, seems really strong and your plot line, even though no much has happened yet seems good. keep it up!