for Little Girl1/31/2006 c1 
2callmebelle
I love this poem because I can get an exact image in my mind of this little girl... Those poems are always the best kind ;). Great work!
2callmebelleI love this poem because I can get an exact image in my mind of this little girl... Those poems are always the best kind ;). Great work!
1/30/2006 c1 31poemkitten7
Wow, it's such a touching and sad poem. The little girl reminds me of a friend I once had. *frown* Whelp, at least it was a really good poem! *smile* Good job!
31poemkitten7Wow, it's such a touching and sad poem. The little girl reminds me of a friend I once had. *frown* Whelp, at least it was a really good poem! *smile* Good job!
1/30/2006 c1 23iknowthethirdthingaboutpoetry
Cute. I kind of like that it tells a story, but "again" really doesn't rhyme with "pain." Wait. You're not British, are you?
23iknowthethirdthingaboutpoetryCute. I kind of like that it tells a story, but "again" really doesn't rhyme with "pain." Wait. You're not British, are you?
1/30/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
This was pretty. I liked it, it kind of recalls what you see everyday and then it takes you in the head of that every day thing.
Well done, even though I was a bit confused.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.
197the Stranger in the moonlightThis was pretty. I liked it, it kind of recalls what you see everyday and then it takes you in the head of that every day thing.
Well done, even though I was a bit confused.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.