
8/14/2010 c1
8SpasticLittleGirl
Ngaw. This is cute. And way shorter too. Maybe a little too short...But good nonetheless.

Ngaw. This is cute. And way shorter too. Maybe a little too short...But good nonetheless.
2/15/2008 c1
9milenaa
It seems a little sudden in the end for her to mention she has a crush on her best friend and was only trying to avoid the feelings by trying to set him up with Brandi, but the idea was very nice and how he was trying to be secretive and told her by hold her hand. Needs a little work, but it's nice.

It seems a little sudden in the end for her to mention she has a crush on her best friend and was only trying to avoid the feelings by trying to set him up with Brandi, but the idea was very nice and how he was trying to be secretive and told her by hold her hand. Needs a little work, but it's nice.
2/10/2006 c1
6Emotionlessxix
Wow, great extract! Or is this going to be continiued? Anyway, I loved it! "Let us permit nature to have her way..." great phrase!
Anyway, I'm NAGGING you to update Borrow your Smile FAST because...I'm DYING! LOL, good job!

Wow, great extract! Or is this going to be continiued? Anyway, I loved it! "Let us permit nature to have her way..." great phrase!
Anyway, I'm NAGGING you to update Borrow your Smile FAST because...I'm DYING! LOL, good job!