for He Hates Me, He Hates Me NOT?3/23/2011 c12 wednesday
any sympathy I felt for the protagonist (for being a jerk magnet) just flew out the window with this chapter. She throws herself at her best guy friend right after running away from the jerk that was her boyfriend. Eejit! What a mindless, spineless bimbo! Can't decide what she wants. The sudden plot twists make the story tasteless and pointless. The good stories all have one thing in common: build-up. It's all about build-up if you want the story to be believable. I don't mean tobe harsh, but Kris just really annoyed me big time. I think you have something going for you, though, because I normally just stop reading stories I don't like, and not even bother giving a negative critique. You did capture my interest, though. I am still going to read tge rest of your story because I am intrigued, even if I don't like Kris.
any sympathy I felt for the protagonist (for being a jerk magnet) just flew out the window with this chapter. She throws herself at her best guy friend right after running away from the jerk that was her boyfriend. Eejit! What a mindless, spineless bimbo! Can't decide what she wants. The sudden plot twists make the story tasteless and pointless. The good stories all have one thing in common: build-up. It's all about build-up if you want the story to be believable. I don't mean tobe harsh, but Kris just really annoyed me big time. I think you have something going for you, though, because I normally just stop reading stories I don't like, and not even bother giving a negative critique. You did capture my interest, though. I am still going to read tge rest of your story because I am intrigued, even if I don't like Kris.
4/12/2009 c19 Miss Mismatch
So I just read everything you have and it's AMAZING! I love it! I love Kris, I just hope that if and when you write more you help her become a more open and trusting person. . . Wink wink. . . :) I think Andrew is an ass who just needs to go fall off the side of a building, At first I liked Drake than that got all messed up, :D now he can go stub his toe and Thomas, I think hes just amazing!
So I just read everything you have and it's AMAZING! I love it! I love Kris, I just hope that if and when you write more you help her become a more open and trusting person. . . Wink wink. . . :) I think Andrew is an ass who just needs to go fall off the side of a building, At first I liked Drake than that got all messed up, :D now he can go stub his toe and Thomas, I think hes just amazing!
1/24/2008 c19 
11Wheresmyprince
Yeah he's great.
If only he was real lol
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Can't wait to see what happens after this :]
11WheresmyprinceYeah he's great.
If only he was real lol
:]
Can't wait to see what happens after this :]
1/23/2008 c19 Hazelnut Romance
i am a new reader so i had quite a bit to catch up on. so now that i have, i must say that ur story is kinda interesting. i hope u'll update soon!
i am a new reader so i had quite a bit to catch up on. so now that i have, i must say that ur story is kinda interesting. i hope u'll update soon!
1/19/2008 c1 Eka
I'm not trying to flame, but this is a really juvenile story...
I'm not trying to flame, but this is a really juvenile story...
1/19/2008 c19 4Yuura
Wow, this story isn't so bad...I look forward to your next chapter and I hope Tom and Kristianne get together although it might end up being hard I just hope they do. I so totally think that Andrew and Drake are really JERKS for doing that to her especially Andrew for raping her 3 times already. Anyways I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. :) Keep up with this story it's very interesting.
4YuuraWow, this story isn't so bad...I look forward to your next chapter and I hope Tom and Kristianne get together although it might end up being hard I just hope they do. I so totally think that Andrew and Drake are really JERKS for doing that to her especially Andrew for raping her 3 times already. Anyways I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. :) Keep up with this story it's very interesting.
1/19/2008 c19 1Stephanie Church
omg! This is so amazing! I am really beginning to hate kris, though. I want Tom for myself! Lol! Update!
~Bella Ride~
1Stephanie Churchomg! This is so amazing! I am really beginning to hate kris, though. I want Tom for myself! Lol! Update!
~Bella Ride~