3/7/2007 c12 Kurissyma San Tybalt
Whoa. Ouch. That's kinda mean. Well, I say 'damn drake' he's a fucking loser to be so... so... so GUYISH! I mean, come on, it's so very like a guy to use a girl like that... hmph *flashing neon light appears out of nowhere, pointing at... ME? "man-hater"*
The ending kinda reminds me of a poem I read once about self-harm, lol.
Xx-Kuris and ASH-xX
Whoa. Ouch. That's kinda mean. Well, I say 'damn drake' he's a fucking loser to be so... so... so GUYISH! I mean, come on, it's so very like a guy to use a girl like that... hmph *flashing neon light appears out of nowhere, pointing at... ME? "man-hater"*
The ending kinda reminds me of a poem I read once about self-harm, lol.
Xx-Kuris and ASH-xX
3/7/2007 c12 anonymous cool person
U-P-D-A-T-E! please?
U-P-D-A-T-E! please?
3/7/2007 c12 9double-life
I really really am enjoying your story. I read it all today. The only thing that I've noticed is that you, you make things like making out seem like such a big deal you know? And if the girl is 16 then it really isn't at that age. Those parts of the story I find a bit unrealistic. But apart from that it is very well written. I really like Tom and Kris's relationship.
I really really am enjoying your story. I read it all today. The only thing that I've noticed is that you, you make things like making out seem like such a big deal you know? And if the girl is 16 then it really isn't at that age. Those parts of the story I find a bit unrealistic. But apart from that it is very well written. I really like Tom and Kris's relationship.
3/7/2007 c12 11Living.My.Life.My.Way
wow...interesting..it took u a really long time to update...plez do it soon this time...lol
wow...interesting..it took u a really long time to update...plez do it soon this time...lol
3/2/2007 c12 Anonymous
W-O-W..love this story. I was a little hesitant at first but it's awesome! Hurry and update!
W-O-W..love this story. I was a little hesitant at first but it's awesome! Hurry and update!
1/21/2007 c11 1littleboots
I LOVE this story. But I hate you for letting the end hang. I was all into the story and it just ended. You are very evil. (Which is a good thing.) Great Story.
I LOVE this story. But I hate you for letting the end hang. I was all into the story and it just ended. You are very evil. (Which is a good thing.) Great Story.
1/20/2007 c11 28woodstock1969
Argh! Cliffhanger! I bet that Tom admits that he loves her. Nothing else would prompt a guy to be that caring, lol.
Argh! Cliffhanger! I bet that Tom admits that he loves her. Nothing else would prompt a guy to be that caring, lol.
1/20/2007 c11 11Living.My.Life.My.Way
aw tom loves her. i think she secretly loves him too, but then it could just be a friendship, but thats not likely...o well i'll find out! UPDATE SOON!
aw tom loves her. i think she secretly loves him too, but then it could just be a friendship, but thats not likely...o well i'll find out! UPDATE SOON!
1/19/2007 c6 11Living.My.Life.My.Way
this is really good gotta read the rest later tho. great so far!
this is really good gotta read the rest later tho. great so far!