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3/11/2006 c1 70Maisha Mafuriko
Beautifully expresed...

...Gives to me the thots of Ecclesiastes 3:1 "To every thing there is a season, an a time to every purpose under the heaven."

Connie AKA Maisha
2/9/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Very well described of a spiritual connection. Kind of philosophical as well. Good write.
2/9/2006 c1 104FunkyFlower
um...pretty good but not exactly to my taste. i love the beginning bits but i suppose the father bits got to me. still good tho!

~mez~
2/2/2006 c1 Needa S
Very nice, awesome job.
2/2/2006 c1 16Greenwitch
Interesting...not sure what it means though. I'm a bit thick. Anyway, I like it, good job! And thanks for reviewing mine.
2/1/2006 c1 19Pink Sparrow
The last line was very powerful. Nice work.
2/1/2006 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
Why not your own time? Good that it is changed, but it seems as if the parent is controlling. Poses some good questions. well written

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