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9/1/2006 c1 2Nephallim
Oh wow. Loverly imagery, truely. I like how the first two lines of the last stanza rhyme.
3/2/2006 c1 Alex Y
The use and comparison of Lucifer as well as other theological aspects as compared to your studies is very unique. This poem is really creative. Good work.
2/1/2006 c1 1R-Vega-X
Not often is Lucifer mentioned in a poem. I admire that your willing to write about things that aren't commonly discused. Good work.

R-Vega-X
2/1/2006 c1 Sophie
I love the capitalization of really important words, it gives the poem a sense of importance. Very well written and organized. - Sophie!
2/1/2006 c1 38serpentinefire94
Hey carmen, I'm sitting at a table with you right now...hehe. Anyways i like this poem..the imagery is really good. rashi

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