
2/2/2006 c1
39SliversofSilverPain
interesting. very interesting. i like the "light admitting happiness, but the only emotion felt is rage." well written and intruiging

interesting. very interesting. i like the "light admitting happiness, but the only emotion felt is rage." well written and intruiging
2/2/2006 c1
3DarkWonders
loved the poem!lauren we loved ya poem aka dani and jade! maybe next time you should break it up into paragraphs. keep up the good work! hope for another peom soon. all the best yr calss mates dani and jade! xoxox

loved the poem!lauren we loved ya poem aka dani and jade! maybe next time you should break it up into paragraphs. keep up the good work! hope for another peom soon. all the best yr calss mates dani and jade! xoxox