for Only a Visage2/17/2006 c1 
829Anaare
Very beautiful. I really enjoyed this poem. Overall, well done! And thanks for putting me on your favorites list.
829AnaareVery beautiful. I really enjoyed this poem. Overall, well done! And thanks for putting me on your favorites list.
2/12/2006 c1 Sunami
The line breaks seem like poetry, gasped out last minute as someone is dying... hmm, interesting... awesome. :)
The line breaks seem like poetry, gasped out last minute as someone is dying... hmm, interesting... awesome. :)
2/8/2006 c1 14Jeremy Kerley
This is a really good poem. I also like your bio, "who am I to judge" I say that all the time!
14Jeremy KerleyThis is a really good poem. I also like your bio, "who am I to judge" I say that all the time!
2/2/2006 c1 16brokendreams21
Interesting rhyming scheme.It was quite cool and effective. It flowed so well and was so pretty. (Puts me to shame) Really elegant words...and despite the fact that it was supposed to be a bit sadder, it made me really happy to read such a good poem! Great job!
16brokendreams21Interesting rhyming scheme.It was quite cool and effective. It flowed so well and was so pretty. (Puts me to shame) Really elegant words...and despite the fact that it was supposed to be a bit sadder, it made me really happy to read such a good poem! Great job!