for plane crash dream6/3/2006 c1 
2W3DNESDAY
amazing, gripping imagery. the allusion to hell is very well carried out and i especially liked the line "like cattle." great work! you're going on my favorites!
2W3DNESDAYamazing, gripping imagery. the allusion to hell is very well carried out and i especially liked the line "like cattle." great work! you're going on my favorites!
2/23/2006 c1 69this is britt
there's so much beautiful description and imagery in here it's overwhelming. (a cameo from chuck palahniuk? that's interesting!)
69this is brittthere's so much beautiful description and imagery in here it's overwhelming. (a cameo from chuck palahniuk? that's interesting!)
2/2/2006 c1 22Lucid Nonsense
Great imagery & diction. I felt like I was there- that must have been some dream!
22Lucid NonsenseGreat imagery & diction. I felt like I was there- that must have been some dream!
2/2/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
I like the phrase 'cradled in an explosion' and especially the ending 'falling down from the sky like streetlights shot out.' That's some great imagery. Keep writing
144chaos called creationI like the phrase 'cradled in an explosion' and especially the ending 'falling down from the sky like streetlights shot out.' That's some great imagery. Keep writing