for The Very Essence of a Hero11/7/2006 c1 Nathan Reimold
Excellent. I have nothing more to say about that one other than it is excellent.
Excellent. I have nothing more to say about that one other than it is excellent.
2/5/2006 c1 
31poemkitten7
Hi! Thanks for reviewing my poem. I'll definitely to take your advice...I just hope it works. Usually, I just kind of stick to one thing..but that's not good, now is it? Okay, well about this poem. It's cute. I love the last line in each stanza. It's either, "The very essence of a hero," or "He paid for what we owe." Good job. Oh yeah, and one more thing...what's a meter? You said I didn't really have much of a meter. I would totally take that into consideration if I know what it meant. Lol, I'm not exactly an expert in poetry. You can probably tell by now. Okay, later!
31poemkitten7Hi! Thanks for reviewing my poem. I'll definitely to take your advice...I just hope it works. Usually, I just kind of stick to one thing..but that's not good, now is it? Okay, well about this poem. It's cute. I love the last line in each stanza. It's either, "The very essence of a hero," or "He paid for what we owe." Good job. Oh yeah, and one more thing...what's a meter? You said I didn't really have much of a meter. I would totally take that into consideration if I know what it meant. Lol, I'm not exactly an expert in poetry. You can probably tell by now. Okay, later!