
5/3/2006 c1
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i don't know what to say. i'm sorry comes to mind. . . but then this could be purely fictional with no slightest bit of truth or experience in it. maybe i'm just being weird. the immagery was mind-blowing and the way you used the scabs in here, wow. yeah, it's past midnight here and i'm supposed to be studying like crazy. shit crazy. makes me think what the fuck am i doing reviewing or even reading on FP. but this deserved it entirely. you're amazing. i wish i had your talent.
(♥)

i don't know what to say. i'm sorry comes to mind. . . but then this could be purely fictional with no slightest bit of truth or experience in it. maybe i'm just being weird. the immagery was mind-blowing and the way you used the scabs in here, wow. yeah, it's past midnight here and i'm supposed to be studying like crazy. shit crazy. makes me think what the fuck am i doing reviewing or even reading on FP. but this deserved it entirely. you're amazing. i wish i had your talent.
(♥)
2/4/2006 c1 a lonely september
oh wow. i just love the way this was written, you have a distinct style. if i tried to write something like this it would be all rambly, but this is just great. completely awesome. you rock.
oh wow. i just love the way this was written, you have a distinct style. if i tried to write something like this it would be all rambly, but this is just great. completely awesome. you rock.
2/4/2006 c1 jaybird
woah! that was amazing, i cant describe how amazing that was its exactly how som1 wud feel after being used, i think so far this is the best poem ive ever heard in my life and ive herd tuns of poems, keep it up please!
woah! that was amazing, i cant describe how amazing that was its exactly how som1 wud feel after being used, i think so far this is the best poem ive ever heard in my life and ive herd tuns of poems, keep it up please!
2/4/2006 c1
10just a teardrop
wow! this is... powerful, painful, raw, lovely. beautifully written, very emotional. i love it.

wow! this is... powerful, painful, raw, lovely. beautifully written, very emotional. i love it.