
2/4/2006 c1
88multiples of six
I like the image & the message of this. Could it possibly be made more poetic with line breaks, or adding a bit more to it, though? It feels incomplete. Also, there's a spelling error or a typo in the summary & one in the poem..

I like the image & the message of this. Could it possibly be made more poetic with line breaks, or adding a bit more to it, though? It feels incomplete. Also, there's a spelling error or a typo in the summary & one in the poem..