for Fatboy Slim5/10/2011 c1 
3Unless-52
Hm...You've actually spelled Jade, 'jade'...I believe you've made that mistake a couple of times, actually. Overall, it was a good chapter. Keep up the good work!
~Miyako
3Unless-52Hm...You've actually spelled Jade, 'jade'...I believe you've made that mistake a couple of times, actually. Overall, it was a good chapter. Keep up the good work!
~Miyako
9/16/2009 c1 7Silencia
This makes me curious~ I wanna know the plan of the coach! X3 Update soon!
Grtz Silencia
7SilenciaThis makes me curious~ I wanna know the plan of the coach! X3 Update soon!
Grtz Silencia
9/1/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Good beginning.
This story has potential.
People who have been bullied can relate to Jared.
Good luck with writing and this story.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrGood beginning.
This story has potential.
People who have been bullied can relate to Jared.
Good luck with writing and this story.
~Twilight Starr~
2/4/2006 c1 8sealednectar
lol:) I like it. It's a good start, keep it up! Make sure you do longer chapters, k? Update soon!
8sealednectarlol:) I like it. It's a good start, keep it up! Make sure you do longer chapters, k? Update soon!