for Behind The Race1/28/2007 c1 
30Charmed.imsure-Always
Oh sugar i noe the feeling! I like the counting, it works really well!
30Charmed.imsure-AlwaysOh sugar i noe the feeling! I like the counting, it works really well!
9/18/2006 c1 8You Make Me Smile A Lot
I like how that flowed, but kept you on the edge. It was really great, and I can tell that it really shows how you feel. I liek the rhyme scheme too.
8You Make Me Smile A LotI like how that flowed, but kept you on the edge. It was really great, and I can tell that it really shows how you feel. I liek the rhyme scheme too.
2/14/2006 c1 51Confused-Mind
This has an interesting setup, but does send a strong message. I too can say I have been stuck and still am in some cases with this "race". Thankyou for writing this poem though it's one of those needed to read it before I could think more about it and how to quit. So thank you, keep up the excellent work!
51Confused-MindThis has an interesting setup, but does send a strong message. I too can say I have been stuck and still am in some cases with this "race". Thankyou for writing this poem though it's one of those needed to read it before I could think more about it and how to quit. So thank you, keep up the excellent work!
2/8/2006 c1 89Lady DreamWriter
Wow! Never looked at writing that way before. Short but full of impact. It's good to have you back!
89Lady DreamWriterWow! Never looked at writing that way before. Short but full of impact. It's good to have you back!
2/6/2006 c1 298Moon-Chaser
I like the way that you have structured this and I can relate to what you were saying. I can feel the frantic pace of this poem.
keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserI like the way that you have structured this and I can relate to what you were saying. I can feel the frantic pace of this poem.
keep it up.
2/6/2006 c1 28emilyrachel18
Alex this poem is amazing babes, i really do love the way you start "one, two, three and four" it always reminds me of a nursery rhyme which makes it kinda eerie and adds to the effect. I really think your an amazing poet and your extremely talented and brave to express what you do through poetry. Remember i'm always here
love em xx
28emilyrachel18Alex this poem is amazing babes, i really do love the way you start "one, two, three and four" it always reminds me of a nursery rhyme which makes it kinda eerie and adds to the effect. I really think your an amazing poet and your extremely talented and brave to express what you do through poetry. Remember i'm always here
love em xx
2/5/2006 c1 20Infection
this was absolutely amazing, loved the bold at the start of each stanza. great rhyme was also consitant.
20Infectionthis was absolutely amazing, loved the bold at the start of each stanza. great rhyme was also consitant.
2/5/2006 c1 lostinrhapsody
i know exactly how you feel, and i love the rhythmic-ness if your poem that lets it flow...
keep writing!
i know exactly how you feel, and i love the rhythmic-ness if your poem that lets it flow...
keep writing!