for Crying Inside4/16/2006 c1 
16The Melancholy Cocoa Bean
'thoughts of you tear away at my heart'
aw. this is so true and sad.
16The Melancholy Cocoa Bean'thoughts of you tear away at my heart'
aw. this is so true and sad.
3/10/2006 c1 44catching-falling-stars
oh how i know what this feels like! unrequited love, ahh how evil it is! great piece of writing!
44catching-falling-starsoh how i know what this feels like! unrequited love, ahh how evil it is! great piece of writing!
2/6/2006 c1 5degeneration-X
Ok, no this is ur best work so far, its actually beautiful, the fact u have to read it thru own tears really adds effect :P
5degeneration-XOk, no this is ur best work so far, its actually beautiful, the fact u have to read it thru own tears really adds effect :P
2/4/2006 c1 29Lemon Blue
This is really good. I really like it!Good job. It is written really well.
Lemon Blue
29Lemon BlueThis is really good. I really like it!Good job. It is written really well.
Lemon Blue
2/4/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
I liked this one. The length worked well for it and I really liked the rhyming! Keep writing!
I liked this one. The length worked well for it and I really liked the rhyming! Keep writing!