for je parle pas francais4/3/2006 c1 
12Sunset Teardrops
What a lovely piece. It instilled in my mind an image of friends having an agreement regarding likes and dislikes. The poem was short, but the words were powerful.
12Sunset TeardropsWhat a lovely piece. It instilled in my mind an image of friends having an agreement regarding likes and dislikes. The poem was short, but the words were powerful.
3/14/2006 c1 8bulletproof.cupid
hah, so playful. the beginning kinda threw me off. . . as if you were trying to speak street french instead of the actual, but i thought it wasn't so, 'cause the guy laughed. it's right in the sense that it's street but the actual is je ne blahblahabalha. heh, cute.
8bulletproof.cupidhah, so playful. the beginning kinda threw me off. . . as if you were trying to speak street french instead of the actual, but i thought it wasn't so, 'cause the guy laughed. it's right in the sense that it's street but the actual is je ne blahblahabalha. heh, cute.
2/18/2006 c1 The Postscript
Wow...I was just talking to a friend about this, flipping through her book and trying to speak French - telling her it was such a beautiful language. She laughed at me as I tried to pronouce a few words. She stopped laughing when I handed her my German book...
Nice poem...and good use of the bold and italics. Keep writing.
Wow...I was just talking to a friend about this, flipping through her book and trying to speak French - telling her it was such a beautiful language. She laughed at me as I tried to pronouce a few words. She stopped laughing when I handed her my German book...
Nice poem...and good use of the bold and italics. Keep writing.
2/16/2006 c1 69mostly water
I however, DO speak French. =)One little thing...it would be, 'je NE parle pas francais'...sort of a double negative but there you have it. By the way, I love it. 'You'll sound so pretty' ... absolutely beautiful. =) x
69mostly waterI however, DO speak French. =)One little thing...it would be, 'je NE parle pas francais'...sort of a double negative but there you have it. By the way, I love it. 'You'll sound so pretty' ... absolutely beautiful. =) x
2/14/2006 c1 10kvnchn
okay, lmfao! okay! the title just totally got me hooked onto this poem ! cuz well... it reminds me of this random comic i saw on a door the other day. It's like... can i have an escargot? and then it's like.. sure... and hten it's like... everything sounds better in french, alrighty read everything else after i get back from school... pretty nice. *thumbs up*
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10kvnchnokay, lmfao! okay! the title just totally got me hooked onto this poem ! cuz well... it reminds me of this random comic i saw on a door the other day. It's like... can i have an escargot? and then it's like.. sure... and hten it's like... everything sounds better in french, alrighty read everything else after i get back from school... pretty nice. *thumbs up*
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2/11/2006 c1 80citrus scented
oh god i love it! i have a slight obsession with the french langauage...and ur right, it does sound so pretty. great format in this too- wonderful piece.
80citrus scentedoh god i love it! i have a slight obsession with the french langauage...and ur right, it does sound so pretty. great format in this too- wonderful piece.
2/7/2006 c1 169MallowsWins
I had to blink until I realized this wasn't an angsty haiku! Nice, lighthearted and fun. I loved it (though I don't understand French).
Peace, Daze
169MallowsWinsI had to blink until I realized this wasn't an angsty haiku! Nice, lighthearted and fun. I loved it (though I don't understand French).
Peace, Daze
2/6/2006 c1 a lonely september
i dont understand french, so i dont know what the french things mean but.. yeah, this was nice.
i dont understand french, so i dont know what the french things mean but.. yeah, this was nice.
2/6/2006 c1 6Dreamof-Roses
I like this... very fun and light hearted.
-D'Rose
And thanks so much for your review!
6Dreamof-RosesI like this... very fun and light hearted.
-D'Rose
And thanks so much for your review!
2/5/2006 c1 19Jason J. Ross
This is a great innovation! Bilingual Haiku, I love it! Who says that all of the syllables need to be from the same language? Keep experimenting!
19Jason J. RossThis is a great innovation! Bilingual Haiku, I love it! Who says that all of the syllables need to be from the same language? Keep experimenting!
2/4/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
hahaa~ dont worry, i dont know french either XD but thats not the point! interesting nevertheless~
keep writing!
132mizu no kokorohahaa~ dont worry, i dont know french either XD but thats not the point! interesting nevertheless~
keep writing!