for The V word5/25/2011 c10 
2akaCHEEKS
Have you ever watched this movie called "Push"? I swear, while I was re-reading this story, I felt like I was watching that movie minus the vampires, demons, and witches of course. They have humans who were born with special abilities like these people. Some of them are pushers who can push a thought into your head while other are watchers, they see the future. I looked up what year that movie was made and google says it was made in 2009. Isn't it such a coincidence that your story has similar terms to that movie? It's like the screen writer read your story and got inspired or something. If you've never watched it, you should. You'd be surprised at the similarities I'm reading and connecting here.
2akaCHEEKSHave you ever watched this movie called "Push"? I swear, while I was re-reading this story, I felt like I was watching that movie minus the vampires, demons, and witches of course. They have humans who were born with special abilities like these people. Some of them are pushers who can push a thought into your head while other are watchers, they see the future. I looked up what year that movie was made and google says it was made in 2009. Isn't it such a coincidence that your story has similar terms to that movie? It's like the screen writer read your story and got inspired or something. If you've never watched it, you should. You'd be surprised at the similarities I'm reading and connecting here.
5/18/2011 c21 Aletta94
Awesome story! =D
I really liked the bantering. And Kate was quite realistic (as realistic you can be as a sort of vampire of course ^^).
Kate & Torres were cute and I liked Jessica and Calc.
Well done!
*Aletta
Awesome story! =D
I really liked the bantering. And Kate was quite realistic (as realistic you can be as a sort of vampire of course ^^).
Kate & Torres were cute and I liked Jessica and Calc.
Well done!
*Aletta
4/27/2011 c21 4taga-ilog
I absolutely loved this fic, especially as I had just finished a long boring one. The fast pace was refreshingly good, without the story veering too much towards pell-mell. I only wish the conflict (vanquishing evil Antonio antagonist) could have been drawn out a little bit more (so we could enjoy more Damien-Kate action interaction. Haha!).
Your take on the vampire lore is also refreshingly unique, with the recessive genes and females having awesome powers. I normally don't like vampire stories, but you are in the few exceptions just because of the great premise! In a saturated vampire world market, your new perspective is really great!
However, I do feel that the main characters were not that developed, in such that you could have told so much more to us readers of their history. The great background stories were already there, so fleshing them out a little more wouldn't have hurt.
But really, over all, this fic ROCKS! I am now going on to read the rest of the series. And could I just point out how unfair that Calc is only now getting his love story with Jessica at Story 4? They were here already at Story 1! Why the wait? Haha. So please, please update Y I Hate Vampires soon.
And thanks for putting up all this great stories! :DD
4taga-ilogI absolutely loved this fic, especially as I had just finished a long boring one. The fast pace was refreshingly good, without the story veering too much towards pell-mell. I only wish the conflict (vanquishing evil Antonio antagonist) could have been drawn out a little bit more (so we could enjoy more Damien-Kate action interaction. Haha!).
Your take on the vampire lore is also refreshingly unique, with the recessive genes and females having awesome powers. I normally don't like vampire stories, but you are in the few exceptions just because of the great premise! In a saturated vampire world market, your new perspective is really great!
However, I do feel that the main characters were not that developed, in such that you could have told so much more to us readers of their history. The great background stories were already there, so fleshing them out a little more wouldn't have hurt.
But really, over all, this fic ROCKS! I am now going on to read the rest of the series. And could I just point out how unfair that Calc is only now getting his love story with Jessica at Story 4? They were here already at Story 1! Why the wait? Haha. So please, please update Y I Hate Vampires soon.
And thanks for putting up all this great stories! :DD
4/23/2011 c21 xkcbby
This was a really nice read. I loved every part of it. I must apologise beforehand that this review won't be so long; I usually write more than this. I am absolutely tired, but I had to finish this! Your writing was smooth as always and you had extremely likeable characters. I'd totally die to be Damien/Kaitlyn. And damn Damien is smokin haha. Ok cheers! This is probably the crappiest feedback in a long while):
This was a really nice read. I loved every part of it. I must apologise beforehand that this review won't be so long; I usually write more than this. I am absolutely tired, but I had to finish this! Your writing was smooth as always and you had extremely likeable characters. I'd totally die to be Damien/Kaitlyn. And damn Damien is smokin haha. Ok cheers! This is probably the crappiest feedback in a long while):
4/8/2011 c21 Warrior-Princess06
Woah! I'm finally done reading ALL the CHAPTERS within 24 hours..haha.! :) It's a good thing that it's vacation already because I don't need to worry about school works..haha.! :)) I SUPER DUPER LOVE IT. It's very unpredictable, unique, interesting, intense, dramatic and full of surprises.! :D Congratulations for this perfectly awesome, wonderful, amazing and PERFECT ending fic.! :D Thanks for sharing your works to us..! :D This fic gave me a mixed emotion..you made me sad, happy, fantastic, enthusiastic and crazy for this fic.! HAHA! I really enjoy reading this.! :D Keep up the good work.! :D
I love Kate and Damien to the fullest! They're perfect for each other.! :)) Same with the others namely, Anne and john, Wolf and Gretchen, and Odette and Ralph.! :)) I'm kinda sad that Calc doesn't have a mate though.! :l I hate Antonio!
Anyways, I'm sorry if i didn't review each chapter. Maybe if I came here around the time when you still writing this fic, I am. And I'm too excited to read the next chapter to leave a review..hehe..so yeah.! :)) Congratulations again and Until next time.! :))
Woah! I'm finally done reading ALL the CHAPTERS within 24 hours..haha.! :) It's a good thing that it's vacation already because I don't need to worry about school works..haha.! :)) I SUPER DUPER LOVE IT. It's very unpredictable, unique, interesting, intense, dramatic and full of surprises.! :D Congratulations for this perfectly awesome, wonderful, amazing and PERFECT ending fic.! :D Thanks for sharing your works to us..! :D This fic gave me a mixed emotion..you made me sad, happy, fantastic, enthusiastic and crazy for this fic.! HAHA! I really enjoy reading this.! :D Keep up the good work.! :D
I love Kate and Damien to the fullest! They're perfect for each other.! :)) Same with the others namely, Anne and john, Wolf and Gretchen, and Odette and Ralph.! :)) I'm kinda sad that Calc doesn't have a mate though.! :l I hate Antonio!
Anyways, I'm sorry if i didn't review each chapter. Maybe if I came here around the time when you still writing this fic, I am. And I'm too excited to read the next chapter to leave a review..hehe..so yeah.! :)) Congratulations again and Until next time.! :))
3/15/2011 c21 3FictionPressWorm
I read this story two days ago, but I wanted to finish the whole trilogy (or saga?) to review.
First of all, I have no words. Really. The story was very VERY good. I don't usually like vampire stories (I'm not a big fan of twilight), but you did make me fall in love with your story and the characters.
I loved how you developed your characters in the story. There was not a moment where I hated or wanted to strangle the main character, which is really rare. Mostly at some point I really dislike the main character(s) of the story I'm reading, but with this story there were no such moments.
I also love endearments. So I really REALLY loved how Damien called Kaitlyn "querida."
The plot itself was really interesting. It was romance+action+adventure, which I completely adore. I also loved some of the juicy parts of the story (you know what I mean?).
The only objection I have is that the story just finished so quickly :D:D:D Maybe it's because I read it in couple of hours, but still. I felt as if it finished when it started. (I'm again being confusing). Anyways, I was really happy to find out that there was a SECOND and a THIRD part of the series already written and completed and the FOURTH one was in progress.
I wish you all the best and I'm hoping you'll update your FOURTH story soon. :)
3FictionPressWormI read this story two days ago, but I wanted to finish the whole trilogy (or saga?) to review.
First of all, I have no words. Really. The story was very VERY good. I don't usually like vampire stories (I'm not a big fan of twilight), but you did make me fall in love with your story and the characters.
I loved how you developed your characters in the story. There was not a moment where I hated or wanted to strangle the main character, which is really rare. Mostly at some point I really dislike the main character(s) of the story I'm reading, but with this story there were no such moments.
I also love endearments. So I really REALLY loved how Damien called Kaitlyn "querida."
The plot itself was really interesting. It was romance+action+adventure, which I completely adore. I also loved some of the juicy parts of the story (you know what I mean?).
The only objection I have is that the story just finished so quickly :D:D:D Maybe it's because I read it in couple of hours, but still. I felt as if it finished when it started. (I'm again being confusing). Anyways, I was really happy to find out that there was a SECOND and a THIRD part of the series already written and completed and the FOURTH one was in progress.
I wish you all the best and I'm hoping you'll update your FOURTH story soon. :)
2/26/2011 c21 artmagus
i like your style! i think you have something with quotes from movies but that's ok i'm like that too :) so now i've finished the second story of Calc and the gang so i 'll go read the rest!
i like your style! i think you have something with quotes from movies but that's ok i'm like that too :) so now i've finished the second story of Calc and the gang so i 'll go read the rest!
1/7/2011 c13 Vita4amore
ohmygod. that was so hot i seriously think i had an orgasm just from reading it!
ohmygod. that was so hot i seriously think i had an orgasm just from reading it!
1/3/2011 c21 1Elaina McKenzie Sharpe
AW! I loved it! I know I've totally gushed like a bobbleheaded teenager-which I am usually not-but I can't not! You're a fantastic writer and I applaude you. I plan to read the rest of your works and have high hopes. There is no doubt in my mind that they will be fantastic. Keep writing, no matter the supernatural creature.
My only suggestion to you is that, maybe you should explain Kate's ward thingy a bit more in the actual story. Other than that, I have zero complaints!
1Elaina McKenzie SharpeAW! I loved it! I know I've totally gushed like a bobbleheaded teenager-which I am usually not-but I can't not! You're a fantastic writer and I applaude you. I plan to read the rest of your works and have high hopes. There is no doubt in my mind that they will be fantastic. Keep writing, no matter the supernatural creature.
My only suggestion to you is that, maybe you should explain Kate's ward thingy a bit more in the actual story. Other than that, I have zero complaints!
1/3/2011 c16 Elaina McKenzie Sharpe
I love, love, love, love, LOVE this freaking story! It's absolutely enthralling. Fantastic! I'm excited that I actually understand most of the french! Damien is totally my favorite and this is a fantastic book! Keep up the amazing skills you've got, becasue you've most definately got them!
I love, love, love, love, LOVE this freaking story! It's absolutely enthralling. Fantastic! I'm excited that I actually understand most of the french! Damien is totally my favorite and this is a fantastic book! Keep up the amazing skills you've got, becasue you've most definately got them!
1/3/2011 c5 Elaina McKenzie Sharpe
OMG! Can I just say one thing? HOT! This is an amazing story! I love it already and am totally hooked! I can't wait to find time to continue reading!
OMG! Can I just say one thing? HOT! This is an amazing story! I love it already and am totally hooked! I can't wait to find time to continue reading!