for The V word2/7/2006 c3 wayretro
Haha yeah that made sense :). This story isn't cliched, in my opinion anyways, and from what I've read so far the characters don't seem to be cliched either. The characters seem to have set personalities and characteristics which is good because often in stories the author will have their character do what they want the character to do and not what it seems like the character would actually do. I'm not sure if that made any sense at all but I hope it did. I love this story so far and can't wait to read more!
Haha yeah that made sense :). This story isn't cliched, in my opinion anyways, and from what I've read so far the characters don't seem to be cliched either. The characters seem to have set personalities and characteristics which is good because often in stories the author will have their character do what they want the character to do and not what it seems like the character would actually do. I'm not sure if that made any sense at all but I hope it did. I love this story so far and can't wait to read more!
2/7/2006 c3 
2Jayn
No Antionio, but hello Damien! I'm really curious here. Not witches, but definatly vampire. Heh heh. Please update!
2JaynNo Antionio, but hello Damien! I'm really curious here. Not witches, but definatly vampire. Heh heh. Please update!
2/6/2006 c3 3J. Marit
hey. i love it already. this chap was hilarious with all that i have ate stuff, lol.
write more soon please..or post :)
Kellie
3J. Marithey. i love it already. this chap was hilarious with all that i have ate stuff, lol.
write more soon please..or post :)
Kellie
2/6/2006 c3 SummerBreeze83
*squeals with delight* that was much better! Now, the only question left is what the heck is going on? What's with this guy? Who's Antonio? Why's Kate so special? *takes deep breaths* I'm okay...I'm okay...update soon and I'll breath fine...
*squeals with delight* that was much better! Now, the only question left is what the heck is going on? What's with this guy? Who's Antonio? Why's Kate so special? *takes deep breaths* I'm okay...I'm okay...update soon and I'll breath fine...
2/6/2006 c2 SummerBreeze83
I'm speechless...that's the best word for it...only because you've left me on the edge! I need more! No...I demand more! Longer chapters and more updates! Grr! This has got my attention!
I'm speechless...that's the best word for it...only because you've left me on the edge! I need more! No...I demand more! Longer chapters and more updates! Grr! This has got my attention!
2/5/2006 c2 nala
i can understand your characters aversion to sunlight. i've heard stories of pasty poms (english people) coming over here (NZ) and laying around in the sun all day expecting to get a tan, except they didn't use sunscreen and they end up looking like a lobster with all the sun burn. its because hwere they are from the solar radiation index is high for them at around 8 during the summer, yet here (because they, the americans, etc are distroying the ozone above antarctica) it doesn't get below 12 (the highest rating) all summer. so you character shouldn't come down here.
anywho, i am enjoying your story. i know its quite early on but nothing at all has been mentioned about kate's parents, apart from the fire memory. how about occasionally putting in her memories from before into the story, at salients points in the plot to add a little mystery to your characters origins. i hope u understand what i'm trying to go on about here.i love your story. i look forward to an update on ff.net (cos i really love that story). cheerio
i can understand your characters aversion to sunlight. i've heard stories of pasty poms (english people) coming over here (NZ) and laying around in the sun all day expecting to get a tan, except they didn't use sunscreen and they end up looking like a lobster with all the sun burn. its because hwere they are from the solar radiation index is high for them at around 8 during the summer, yet here (because they, the americans, etc are distroying the ozone above antarctica) it doesn't get below 12 (the highest rating) all summer. so you character shouldn't come down here.
anywho, i am enjoying your story. i know its quite early on but nothing at all has been mentioned about kate's parents, apart from the fire memory. how about occasionally putting in her memories from before into the story, at salients points in the plot to add a little mystery to your characters origins. i hope u understand what i'm trying to go on about here.i love your story. i look forward to an update on ff.net (cos i really love that story). cheerio
2/5/2006 c2 2Jayn
I really like this story so far. ^_^ Its pretty good. Please update soon I want to know who this Antonio guy is.
2JaynI really like this story so far. ^_^ Its pretty good. Please update soon I want to know who this Antonio guy is.
2/5/2006 c2 wayretro
I really like it so far! It's original which is good because I'm getting really tired of all the cliched stories on here.Can't wait to read more!
I really like it so far! It's original which is good because I'm getting really tired of all the cliched stories on here.Can't wait to read more!