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3/3/2006 c1 Edraith
Interesting, i like the symbolism in "grey-haired" standing for death and "green-haired" which could stand for hope. Nice piece.
2/19/2006 c1 5lokita 4 lyfe
omg *sobs* your haiku is so true and sad at the same time. but don't worry I liked it! thanx for thinking my rhyming in the barney song was good, another person thought it DIDN'T rhyme and was all critsizing it and telling me how to write it... ah well shows how much they know.

~Blu
2/9/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Very good use of colors and it's implied relationship to age. good write.
2/6/2006 c1 34Smoky Bear
very heartfelt. the essence of haiku is truly captured. beautiful.
2/6/2006 c1 a lonely september
different, but i like it.
2/6/2006 c1 49Toxic.Industrial.Waste
hm. A bit abstract...I liked it.
2/5/2006 c1 48Vyvyan
Interesting choice of words. Leaves me wondering. Very nice.
2/5/2006 c1 88multiples of six
Ohh, that was really sad. I love how so little information is given but the reader can still make a little story out of it, and picture it. Nicely done. =)
2/5/2006 c1 20Infection
this was really good.
2/5/2006 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I like how you used hair color to give weight and personality to these characters. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

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