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7/27/2006 c1 5Ladiebug
Great! I admire this type of writing, because i always have to have my poem's rhyme for some reason, and can never seem to express a poem with rhymes here and there, but with some words just blunt. Don't know if that made any sense, but nice job.
3/27/2006 c1 34Smoky Bear
nicely ambiguos, you can draw all kinds of conclusions from this... it could be an illicit, secretive affair on one hand or a crush thats evolved beyond the recognisible confines of reality and the protagonist is fantasizing... or something else? lol
3/9/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
Are you saying don't love me becaue I hurts too much?

I liked this poem, because it made me think about what you were trying to say instead of my usual assumption that I know.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.
2/14/2006 c1 24xLilyx
aww this is sad, expressive though. I like the last four lines best, they flow really nice!
2/14/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
very nicely expressed~ good work

keep writing!
2/11/2006 c1 Herminia
This is a good poem. It's an interesting way to describe the feeling of nothing and "never here". Well done!
2/5/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
"put your mind in resistence" that was a very nice ending line because it really finishes the poem off. Excellent job! Keep writing!

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