for Never Here7/27/2006 c1 
5Ladiebug
Great! I admire this type of writing, because i always have to have my poem's rhyme for some reason, and can never seem to express a poem with rhymes here and there, but with some words just blunt. Don't know if that made any sense, but nice job.
5LadiebugGreat! I admire this type of writing, because i always have to have my poem's rhyme for some reason, and can never seem to express a poem with rhymes here and there, but with some words just blunt. Don't know if that made any sense, but nice job.
3/27/2006 c1 34Smoky Bear
nicely ambiguos, you can draw all kinds of conclusions from this... it could be an illicit, secretive affair on one hand or a crush thats evolved beyond the recognisible confines of reality and the protagonist is fantasizing... or something else? lol
34Smoky Bearnicely ambiguos, you can draw all kinds of conclusions from this... it could be an illicit, secretive affair on one hand or a crush thats evolved beyond the recognisible confines of reality and the protagonist is fantasizing... or something else? lol
3/9/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
Are you saying don't love me becaue I hurts too much?
I liked this poem, because it made me think about what you were trying to say instead of my usual assumption that I know.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.
197the Stranger in the moonlightAre you saying don't love me becaue I hurts too much?
I liked this poem, because it made me think about what you were trying to say instead of my usual assumption that I know.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.
2/14/2006 c1 24xLilyx
aww this is sad, expressive though. I like the last four lines best, they flow really nice!
24xLilyxaww this is sad, expressive though. I like the last four lines best, they flow really nice!
2/11/2006 c1 Herminia
This is a good poem. It's an interesting way to describe the feeling of nothing and "never here". Well done!
This is a good poem. It's an interesting way to describe the feeling of nothing and "never here". Well done!
2/5/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
"put your mind in resistence" that was a very nice ending line because it really finishes the poem off. Excellent job! Keep writing!
"put your mind in resistence" that was a very nice ending line because it really finishes the poem off. Excellent job! Keep writing!