for Tides of Change3/18/2006 c1 
17Dancing Fairy
I have looked at all your poems and thought they were all amazingly good. The language in this one is particularly good because it's unusual i.e. phantom instead of ghost. Also the comparison of a hundred kisses with one soul is very effective. Fab work! x
17Dancing FairyI have looked at all your poems and thought they were all amazingly good. The language in this one is particularly good because it's unusual i.e. phantom instead of ghost. Also the comparison of a hundred kisses with one soul is very effective. Fab work! x
2/5/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
"Sending a hundred kisses across the waves," Absolutely love this line! This is such a sad, yet wonderful poem! Very good job!
"Sending a hundred kisses across the waves," Absolutely love this line! This is such a sad, yet wonderful poem! Very good job!