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2/20/2006 c1 19SilverRain1011
Very deep, I love the line "frigid skies spit out darkness". I enjoy all of your haikus! Keep up the good work!
2/19/2006 c1 18an-angel-in-hell
ooh... i like it. Good, deep. Dark. Awesome, basically.
2/15/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Interesting haiku. Very vivid. Well done.
2/7/2006 c1 64Samara-chan
I really, really liked this. A melancholy and powerful poem. I love "frigid skies spit out darkness." Beautiful metaphor.
2/7/2006 c1 88multiples of six
Wow.. very creepy. Definitely seems to be about war, to me at least. Nicely written!
2/7/2006 c1 216ygg
Yes I LOVE the second line. Very ominous, terrifying even. Excellent work!

PS. Thank you for your many reviews :)
2/6/2006 c1 63Disturbing Enigma
I loved the term "frigid skies spit out darkness." Great personification. Awesome job!

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