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3/18/2008 c1 59Tranquil Thorns
How dreamy!

An excellent fable/explanation about the beginning of the earth. I like the idea of it being spun and gathered together by a traveling space-deity, or whoever the mysterious girl might be. I liked how use the sun as a character, too.

Very well-written!
2/19/2006 c1 1Triden
I like that! it's an interesting creation story, scientic and magical. i like your take on the sun, it'svery original.

~Triden

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