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9/7/2006 c1 3Still Pretending
I really like this one, ur a good poet... like very good with words... anyway, it's very dark and I guess that why I like it so much.
8/5/2006 c1 41Surfacing
Holy! F*cking sh*t! I LOVE THIS! great work) keep it up;)
3/5/2006 c1 18ShadesofBlue69
hm, i don't like this one as much as your others...it seems to simply angsty...but then again maybe thats not a bad thing, and it might just be because that i feel happy today that i haven't tuned into this. i really don't like the "she slowly dies" line...just seems to angsty again. but i do like the idea of clawing through her memories, and crying in darkness.It feels like this poem should flow together, and it doesn't, and the format just doesn't seem to fit it.We can't produce perfect work all the time, and alot of your other stuff is good.
2/6/2006 c1 93Blazing Icecrystals
I love it. There's no better word to describe this than amazing. Good job.
2/6/2006 c1 31poemkitten7
Oh! This poem is so sad and tragic. But very nicely written. I love the bold words and how each line holds something really powerful. Good job!
2/6/2006 c1 nofaceme
very simple, and to the point. Keep it up!
2/6/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
The word twists and dark aspects of this work well, as the flow is enhanced by the images that are created. Has an excellent lyrical feel to it. Good work.

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